This is my first work here where i have tried to give a fresh breath to the si genre with a focus on world building and self-motivated realism. The story is on its initial stages and I feel giddy writing it.
There will be focus on the ninja aspect of mc with a tad bit romance and feudal touch and business ideas.i hope readers will like it 😆
a year ago
5
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it needs editing and how TF can he do millions of ryo business and not have people snooping around especially when he is also selling tags
Overall it's not a bad story so far. The big issue is that it needs editing. There are a ton of typos and a few grammatical errors in it. Also it's in the wrong section. Theres a fanfiction section that it should be in.
This is my first work here where i have tried to give a fresh breath to the si genre with a focus on world building and self-motivated realism. The story is on its initial stages and I feel giddy writing it. There will be focus on the ninja aspect of mc with a tad bit romance and feudal touch and business ideas.i hope readers will like it 😆
it needs editing and how TF can he do millions of ryo business and not have people snooping around especially when he is also selling tags
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Overall it's not a bad story so far. The big issue is that it needs editing. There are a ton of typos and a few grammatical errors in it. Also it's in the wrong section. Theres a fanfiction section that it should be in.