Living With Death

Vocabulary is very well thought out. I also like stories where Gods/Fundamentals wish to live the lives of mortals, and when they attempt to live such lives, it results in disastrous consequences. I also like the whole "no one can die" aspect. I've seen that before in Torchwood and it allows for some good writing.

First of all, the story seems catching even from the starts that you will wonder what kind of fate Daniel and the death/grim reaper will encounter as the story goes on. Second, I really like the way you narrate/describe the scenes, thoughts and action of the characters it's understandable. Lastly, your grammar and chosen words it's good. I expect a lot of interesting things to happen in this story.

the scoop of the story is quite interesting, it is seen that the author is making an effort in his novel, the only thing that bothers me a little is the Synopsis, and in my opinion it is very simple and does not attract me much. And I also recommend that you look for a better cover for your novel, it already has potential. but otherwise I have no complaints. good start author

A novel about death and the MC. Kinda like the story and was based on author's imaginations and as well as tropes that already existed. The novel will not exist without the tropes that are already there. Just saying....anyways the story was like death and me and I like it! Kudos for a job well done! [img=recommend]

Nice work you got there, author... Grammer is all in place; my heart has been captured by the first chapter, but it is sad that there is only one chapter. I hope you will not drop this, and I look forward to seeing more of your work.

I can't say much because it's just the first chapter but I think this story will be great, still can't say much since it's the first chapter.

The book is good but it's too small I need more chapters

Writing is amazing and the premise is very interesting. Even though it is very early to say how the story would develop, I am hoping for the rest of the story to be as interesting as the start. Good luck, Author.

It's interesting Better writing than mine And the words are catchy and poetic. 😮😮😮 ...,... ........ ...... ........ ........ ....... ..... ...... .........

This story is really cool! It's about Death who wants to know what it's like to be alive. He meets a guy named Daniel who's really sad. Then Death stops doing his job, and things get all messed up. It's a super exciting start with lots of mystery and stuff. I can't wait to read more and find out what happens next!

That was a really good one for the first chapter author-sama. The flow of words aren't awkward at all and falls into place almost naturally. And the premise of the story (correct me if I'm wrong) is really unique. It literally made my eyes pop out my head upon realizing what death had done. Love it💛