You know the story. Our main character dies. He gets reincarnated as Apollo.
But he dies again. Don't worry, cause he gets reincarnated again.
This story is mainly to work on my English. Feel free to make grammatical/spelling corrections (or suggestions), and I'll try to respond in a timely manner.
First of all the story is amazing 🤩 I am really enjoying it The storyline is about a God in modern world as a God he is already the strongest. There are currently only two gods in the story.....I like the character's interactions between each other and I look forward to how the author develop the current story
Good grammar and the plot is good can't wait to read it and please don't drop it.
This is my story. I think it's pretty good. What a shocker. It's definitely not for everyone, but sometimes you want something different. On those rare days, this is it.
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certified banger. A bit too wish-fulfillmenty. Love the crossovers. Romance is slightly iffy. I understand they're gods, but Artemis is only 9 rn, he still has a much higher mental age. Anyways, i like it
its messy and many things is make meaning even for a fantasy genre
i dont recommend this for Muslim readers
Nice read just turn off your brain cells and give it a read
this is super good, though I'm feeling a little disappointed because there's no more
Americas the best country in the world!!!!
Never use actual real US President. They are polarizing figures. No matter which side you stand on. It takes you out of the fiction in fan fiction.
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It‘s not my favourite novel but I like it till now, even though there are a few things I don‘t understand and a few decisions made I do not like. But there are also things I think are quite the interesting ideas and could go either way, for example the fact that it is not just any parallel earth but the one from a particular show, even though not much has happened with it for now (which I don‘t even necessarily think is bad). Also I see these cookies everywhere now, even in my sleep. Just last night I had a nightmare involving these cookies, I don‘t know why they bother me so much but they do
I'm at chap 10 and I'm so excited for all the possibilities like brooklyn 99, monden family, kim's convenience,Good girls, blacklist, suit Shameless, breaking bad universe inside job, swat. If this man does not put any of these tvshows in, I'm gonna be so mad and depressed.
Although the story is short, it has a nice conclusion of the story.