The writing itself is fantastic, makes one wonder if they’re reading a wn or a traditionally published book. The author’s story telling is vivid, giving the reader the maximum immersion. Another thing which I really like about the writing is the transition, it’s flawless.
Author has been updating everyday so 5 stars for that. As for the story development, it’s fabulous. We’re told about the misery and resentment the disgraced race has embraced for thousands of years. They’ve been mercilessly oppressed by the guys up above, and now their ray of hope comes in the form of the one this book revolves around: Prince Azazel. I can’t wait for how it unfolds!
Since I’ve only read the first few chaps, cant say much about the character development. But I’m excited to see how he lives up to the expectations of his ancestors. Heavy lies the head that wears the crown and all that hehe. Also he’s a blind gunslinger! Bruh sign me up.
The world background feels like it’s gonna be a mix between Victorian era and fantasy maybe? Although I’m not sure how this will unfold. But I have great hopes for the world building. perhaps the author will surprise use with his creativity.
Overall, between the creative writing, the vivid imagery, the author’s magic with words, and finally an awesome MC, this book has the potential to be a top selling book on this platform. Keep up the great work, author!
a year ago
2
PrinceClover
The author is a master of his craft, his experience and knowledge regarding writing had been shown in his execution. The writing quality are top-notch, not even talking about the world building as it is really rich and portrayed really well!! The characters are designed really good, and they even have their secrets I can't see through. I just loved the characters, especially their odd behavior, itching you to know more about them. The pace or story development are well controlled, and a single transition garnered my attention. As for update stability, it will probably depends on how you will show your support to the novel! So give the author some golden ticket and power stones to encourage him to increase his updates!
a year ago
2
GoldShiresInn
This story is written by a great author! Who has once again, did another great job!
a year ago
2
Shadow_Magus
Amazing novel!!!! Well written plotlines and characters with defining features and personalities that stick to them and don't change for the sake of the plot. The plot especially keeps you on your toes as to what could and would happen and I really liked it. Just hope more chapters were available. Thanks!
a year ago
1
Around_The_Moon
A good story. Thought the pacing is slow but it hooks up the reader. It would be great if author make it more easy to read as there are chunks of large paragraphs. But it gets a 5 star review.
a year ago
1
BIG_BAD_WOLF2000
First, I loved the Synopsis, second, i felt like i was reading a book rather than a wn great writing great style, please add more chapters as I am already hooked to the story
a year ago
1
I_am_Creator
The story had a nice start. it is shrouded with mysteries and suspense. writing was smooth and flowy, one could imagine things around them. the story develop in a good pace, not too fast or slow. the characters were well designed with a back story. i am more inclined to read further. best of luck author.
a year ago
1
TheHatedAuthor
The writing is stellar, and the plot seems interesting. I was reading and within minutes, wondered when the next chapter was coming out with anticipation. There are hints of darkness, cool powers, and potentially betrayal (i think?). Anyways, great work author!
a year ago
1
_EverSmile
There is nothing I can say than well done author. You capture the moment and present it like a movie. The scenes progress so beautifully that I was so engrossed till time pass. I don't read this type of genres but I love this and you pique my interest.
I can't wait to see how the plot unfolded. A revolver in supernatural world?!
Gush!
Love it.
Don't stop else, I'll sue you. Lol.
The writing itself is fantastic, makes one wonder if they’re reading a wn or a traditionally published book. The author’s story telling is vivid, giving the reader the maximum immersion. Another thing which I really like about the writing is the transition, it’s flawless. Author has been updating everyday so 5 stars for that. As for the story development, it’s fabulous. We’re told about the misery and resentment the disgraced race has embraced for thousands of years. They’ve been mercilessly oppressed by the guys up above, and now their ray of hope comes in the form of the one this book revolves around: Prince Azazel. I can’t wait for how it unfolds! Since I’ve only read the first few chaps, cant say much about the character development. But I’m excited to see how he lives up to the expectations of his ancestors. Heavy lies the head that wears the crown and all that hehe. Also he’s a blind gunslinger! Bruh sign me up. The world background feels like it’s gonna be a mix between Victorian era and fantasy maybe? Although I’m not sure how this will unfold. But I have great hopes for the world building. perhaps the author will surprise use with his creativity. Overall, between the creative writing, the vivid imagery, the author’s magic with words, and finally an awesome MC, this book has the potential to be a top selling book on this platform. Keep up the great work, author!
The author is a master of his craft, his experience and knowledge regarding writing had been shown in his execution. The writing quality are top-notch, not even talking about the world building as it is really rich and portrayed really well!! The characters are designed really good, and they even have their secrets I can't see through. I just loved the characters, especially their odd behavior, itching you to know more about them. The pace or story development are well controlled, and a single transition garnered my attention. As for update stability, it will probably depends on how you will show your support to the novel! So give the author some golden ticket and power stones to encourage him to increase his updates!
This story is written by a great author! Who has once again, did another great job!
Amazing novel!!!! Well written plotlines and characters with defining features and personalities that stick to them and don't change for the sake of the plot. The plot especially keeps you on your toes as to what could and would happen and I really liked it. Just hope more chapters were available. Thanks!
A good story. Thought the pacing is slow but it hooks up the reader. It would be great if author make it more easy to read as there are chunks of large paragraphs. But it gets a 5 star review.
First, I loved the Synopsis, second, i felt like i was reading a book rather than a wn great writing great style, please add more chapters as I am already hooked to the story
The story had a nice start. it is shrouded with mysteries and suspense. writing was smooth and flowy, one could imagine things around them. the story develop in a good pace, not too fast or slow. the characters were well designed with a back story. i am more inclined to read further. best of luck author.
The writing is stellar, and the plot seems interesting. I was reading and within minutes, wondered when the next chapter was coming out with anticipation. There are hints of darkness, cool powers, and potentially betrayal (i think?). Anyways, great work author!
There is nothing I can say than well done author. You capture the moment and present it like a movie. The scenes progress so beautifully that I was so engrossed till time pass. I don't read this type of genres but I love this and you pique my interest. I can't wait to see how the plot unfolded. A revolver in supernatural world?! Gush! Love it. Don't stop else, I'll sue you. Lol.