Discontinued_Novel

5 stars cuz I'm a big fan of myself. [TLDR at the end] I'm here to tell you important things you should probably know. Please read this through so that you won't get confused about the story. -The story will follow Two Protagonists. Yes, Two. -Sean's story will take place on a version of Earth, and Ken's will be in the world- Estania- inside the game that Sean found, "Adventure Beckons". -There will be time dilations between the two worlds, and the time on Estania will be faster than on Earth. -The story will mostly be focused on Ken and Estania for the most part. -Sean's story will be much more important later in the series as it nears the end. So, don't forget about my poor boy! -I'll figure out ways to incorporate Sean's activities... maybe at the end of each chapter. Please comment if you have ideas about this. I'm thinking of a diary style. -This is a rework of my previous novel, but the plot will be totally different. And, I plan to see this to the end! So, what should you expect from my novel? Well, there will be no harem, but I plan to have some romance involved. There will be some bloody fight scenes and the story may turn dark at times. Of course, there will be some comedy here and there as well as some anime or vtuber references... Both Sean and Ken will be pathetically weak at the start, but they will grow stronger in their own ways. And, don't think it's just a cliche about systems, mana, heroes, and demons... Lastly, please show your support by voting, commenting, and giving a review. I appreciate your patience for reading this through. Have a great day. Yours truly, Senecio *** [TLDR]: Two MCs, weak to strong MCs, Time dilation between the two worlds, Dark and bloody battles, and not a cliche.

There are only 7 chapters uploaded as I am typing this right now. Solid story. There are not many grammar mistakes and the writing improves as the story progresses. Good luck, mate! Your work is Atomic!

A unique novel with two protagonists which might be a bit hard for some people to follow. There are definitely some improvements to be made but overall, it's a great read.

You are a force to be reckoned with! That first six chaps was a rollercoaster of a ride. You're gonna smirk one second and then get sad by the sudden change of mood. Keep on improving author!

The writer brings his characters to life and has some really funny moments in the early chapters. I really like it and will continue reading for sure!

Nice comedy. Definitely a niche in the industry with two protagonists. Idk how Author will handle the jumps to and fro the two worlds. I'll be watching how this gem unfold.

A promising novel on the way. I notice deep and affluent words that are used in the synopsis and as I skimmed through the chapters, the author has a profound vocabulary. This has a lot of potential to rise!

Solid story! Having two protagonist in different world made the story more interesting. I hope more chapters to come as there are only a few chapters written!

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