STORM OVER A PARADISE:THE DARK LOOM

STORM OVER A PARADISE:THE DARK LOOM

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Author: Timothy_Odhiambo
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Perhaps he had gone up the tree of love a boy and come down a young man, maybe he had learned not of its mysteries.



Chris is torn between his love for Laura and his obsession with Amelia, a woman he has never expressed his feelings to. When a close relative, Ann, tells him a lie that Amelia is betrothed to another man, Chris is driven to commit a terrible act. In a moment of madness, he kills Amelia, only to realize as he lays her lifeless body on the ground that it was their engagement day. But will Chris face the consequences of his actions and come to terms with the devastating truth of what he has done?



This story explores themes of love, obsession, and the destructive power of lies. It is a tragic tale of a man who loses everything because of a misguided heart.

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whispers_timmy

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a year ago
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Timothy_Odhiambo
Timothy_Odhiambo

This is a great story that explores the theme of love and obsession like no other, but from the beginning as it cooks slowly perhaps for the author's plan to develop his characters all round

a year ago
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whispers_timmy
whispers_timmy

the poetic writing technique is awesome and the character development too. It is as if the author was following every step the mc[img=exp] walked.

a year ago
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Seaquin
Seaquin

The synopsis is alluring and the authors description is top notch. The first three chapters piqued my curiosity.

a year ago
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NIHILA
NIHILA

The author's vivid descriptions and evocative language make this story a must-read, capturing the essence of a love so deep it can't escape a tragic fate.

a year ago
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Marconegrao7
Marconegrao7

I'm glad that I'm the first one to review this book. It's good so far. The pacing is excellent, story telling is amazing and a very good read so far. It definitely needs way more views.

a year ago
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