Pixel Pioneers: Forging Dreams in Real Time

I haven't read it all yet, but it's amazing. Especially the way you explain it in such detail. However, I think you should pay more attention to the dialogue parts; in my opinion, it's still quite monologous, so I hope you'll provide text for the dialogue. And if possible, lengthen the story in each chapter. Keep up the good work, friend. This novel is truly amazing! 🫸🌟🫷😁

I'll be honest. This is a fantastic book with great potential. It is a unique story! I think. The author's writing style is impressive and engaging, making it an enjoyable read. I would suggest that the author aims for more consistent chapter releases, preferably one per day (maybe two), to keep readers engaged. The world-building and character design are strong points of the book. However, there is room for improvement in character interactions, as the story sometimes feels more like a personal diary than a dynamic narrative. There is no Dialogue! I started to feel like he didn't talk at all in the story. Despite these minor issues, I appreciate the story and want to support the author in their writing journey. Good Luck!

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