The Seven Hells

Overall, a very honest attempt. Very interesting world background, you can surely build up upon that. I would like to say that, it could be way better if you paced the story in such a way that we, as readers could glimpse the world and the characters intention on our own. The various informations in the beginning could be edited, grammar needs some work. Overall, interesting concept.

Hi Author! First of all, I like the idea, the setting, and how you narrate the story. The writing is good, making pictures inside my head was easy because of it and I enjoyed reading this, but as I read through the chapter, I noticed some punctuation errors. It doesn't really bother the experience for me, but it would be better to correct them as there are some readers who are sensitive to that detail. I hope my review could help you, great work on this book!

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Wow an amazing read! I am looking to binge read this one after just reading the first chapter. I hope to tell anyone who reads this to try this novel out!

A captivating storyline, it is refreshing and beautiful. I was captured the minute I started reading the book, I will be looking out for you author.

Hello. Is there any kind of yuri here? I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading. thanks

please I am a new writer and really needs your support out there, thank you

the story has been well plotted, really interesting ,keep up the good work

Well written and descriptive, main character develops quite nicely and it's a breezy pace keep up the good work

This book is an exhilarating journey through the realm of magic, courage, and determination. Baili's character development from an ordinary young man to a formidable force against the devil army is truly captivating. The richly imagined world of Ornifal, inhabited by diverse beings, adds depth to the narrative. As Baili's power grows through his unique bloodline, readers are treated to a thrilling exploration of his innate abilities. Fortuitous encounters and the discovery of bloodline memory arts keep the story engaging. For fans of epic fantasy with well-drawn characters and a compelling hero's journey, this book is a must-read.

What an amazing read! As soon as I find the time, I plan to binge-read this novel. I'm excited to share my recommendation with anyone who loves a good story [img=recommend]

Interesting work of art with engaging characters. Nice work author.

the storyline is going somewhere and that's really nice buh i feel the author needs to work on his grammar especially in terms of past and present, asides that it is a very attracting novel u hv made