Mark Greyson, a boy trying to survive in the hellish city that is Gotham city, his father disappeared when he was younger and it had left his mother distraught and antisocial.
He took it upon himself to help support his mother, though in Gotham the only steady pay comes from crime.
However one day he learns from his mother who his father actually was, the hero Omni-man who disappeared years ago during a mission with the justice league.
I do not own invincible or DC comics
Tbh I feel a bit cringe reviewing my own work, but I gotta say I do enjoy writing this fic and it’s my second comic book one, I think I did better on this one tbh.
I like the concept and character development so far and I hope you keep up the good work
Muy buena historia pero nerfeaste a los viltrumitas demasiado o sea son como los saiyan cuanto más entrenan más fuertes se vuelven a demás hay muchos personajes de invecible que pueden que son más fuertes que superman osea omniman es más rápido i tan fuerte como superman i trahgg es casi seis veces más fuerte que onmiman los viltrumitas cuanto más viejos son más fuertes se vuelven i Nolan solo entreno menos de 19 años de su vida i mira lo fuerte que es i Mark entreno una 20 años en una dimension diferente i casi iguala a su padre
Best DC fic right now on this app. The concept is very original and the story is shaping out to be very realistic. Can't wait for more chapters.
Excellent ff. The plot is interesting and original, the actions of the characters are exciting. At the same time, ff is not overloaded with either a stupid description or stupid illogical behavior of the characters. Compared to most disgusting works, it's divine, I recommend it) But I already feel sorry for Mark, can he have a normal weekend?) And please don't overdo it with the addition of female characters: that would be too caricatured. The Joker was right about the cake, it's better not to overeat.
Great, but two more chapters are missing in a serious week, ideally, and I'm sure that over time this fanfic will go to top. Alalalalalalalalaalalalalaalallalallaallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalalalalalallalala
Honestly this is probably one of if not the favourite fic I have read recently would definitely recommend.
honestly, it's better than I expected, it has really good Grammer and good written character interactions. Mc is not stuiped, he also isn't op right from the start.
Pretty good the best invincible x dc, story I’ve read.
Brotha, we're STARVING out fere! Give us some more PLEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSEE!!!!
The store is great but I am commenting because I like the way you right and I have a request for a novel It's someone reborn with a Jurassic world system in either Marvel or DC It's just a idea I wish you good luck
Whether it be Dragon Ball, Marvel, DC, Rick and Morty, or Invincible. Mark will never be able to catch a break the moment he awakens his powers.
Read up to the current chapter on Patreon. What I really like is that Mark, even though is different than the show, still feels like Mark. The characters also feel talk and act like they would in the comics or in the show. Now what I like about this story compared to others is the amazing blend of action and r18 scenes. Some r18 stories get tiring to read because it gets kinda boring. The action scenes help break it up the monotony and are really well done. Please don’t stop making this story.
I want to show my appreciation for this work. One of the more unique aspects of this work is the action. It’s quite descriptive. The mc also gets hit. That makes the fight scenes so much more satisfying when he hits back. Love it and thanks for writing this.
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