Life Can Change || DC x Invincible Fic

Tbh I feel a bit cringe reviewing my own work, but I gotta say I do enjoy writing this fic and it’s my second comic book one, I think I did better on this one tbh.

I like the concept and character development so far and I hope you keep up the good work

Muy buena historia pero nerfeaste a los viltrumitas demasiado o sea son como los saiyan cuanto más entrenan más fuertes se vuelven a demás hay muchos personajes de invecible que pueden que son más fuertes que superman osea omniman es más rápido i tan fuerte como superman i trahgg es casi seis veces más fuerte que onmiman los viltrumitas cuanto más viejos son más fuertes se vuelven i Nolan solo entreno menos de 19 años de su vida i mira lo fuerte que es i Mark entreno una 20 años en una dimension diferente i casi iguala a su padre

Best DC fic right now on this app. The concept is very original and the story is shaping out to be very realistic. Can't wait for more chapters.

Excellent ff. The plot is interesting and original, the actions of the characters are exciting. At the same time, ff is not overloaded with either a stupid description or stupid illogical behavior of the characters. Compared to most disgusting works, it's divine, I recommend it) But I already feel sorry for Mark, can he have a normal weekend?) And please don't overdo it with the addition of female characters: that would be too caricatured. The Joker was right about the cake, it's better not to overeat.

Great, but two more chapters are missing in a serious week, ideally, and I'm sure that over time this fanfic will go to top. Alalalalalalalalaalalalalaalallalallaallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalalalalalallalala

Read out of boredom, stayed because it was interesting and worth continuing to read. Only wish there were more chapters for me to binge and it didn't go so quickly.

honestly, it's better than I expected, it has really good Grammer and good written character interactions. Mc is not stuiped, he also isn't op right from the start.

Pretty good the best invincible x dc, story I’ve read.

Honestly this is probably one of if not the favourite fic I have read recently would definitely recommend.

Great Story, the characters are extremely fleshed out, and their actions make sense. I hope there is more world-building on how exactly the viltrumites fit in the DC universe and their exact power scaling soon. And there is no need to force a Harem if you feel like you can't write it properly.

The story is very good, the web novel lacks more works like this,very good to pass the time, It's nice to see something that doesn't have to do with a truck running over someone and getting wishes, please don't stop making more of this story

This has been way more enjoyable than I expected. You make the introduction of viltrumites into the DC universe so believable and I love your way of writing I cant wait for more.

So far it's great, but the chapter frequency is a problem.!!!!!!!!!!@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@