finally a fanfic where the MC doesn't try to take everything from the protagonist, and just wants to go home.
a year ago
21
Ryan_Colman
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6 months ago
10
Janune_Kilua
i should say it's great to see you back.
its really great fanfic better than many others but you have to update really stably
you were away for how many months
a year ago
5
Avos_Voldigoad
Please make MC killing Yun Che[img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous]
8 months ago
4
ACHILLES
As much as. i want to put this lower because the family being put in i can't best Atg i read in awhile but he just had to bring them here and now it feels like multiple mc's i wish the best of luck and well see if i can find something simmilar without the family being in...
8 months ago
3
Arigin
Amazing work author, I am sure you can improve even more. Just hope that the harem is not just a vase but actually powerful and can fight and help MC.
2 months ago
2
Psan
Whats the raw name? And dont say its original cause you often mistake profound for ground a quite a few times in the same chapter. That is a mistake done by automatic tranlations
3 months ago
2
Dannt_
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8 months ago
2
ONE_ABOVE_ALL
I don't know of others for me the novel title is unappealing .........in this world humans are already at top.
though the novel is good 👍 keep it up author
10 months ago
2
InfinityWolfS2
Os primeiros 15 capítulos são bem chatos e irritantes de se ler, mais depois disso até que fica bem interessante.
Estou atualmente no capitulo 25, e esta tomando um rumo bem interessante.
10 months ago
2
Intankan
I've come back to see the restart of this fanfic, thanks for not giving up on it, good luck!
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3 months ago
1
CoffeeCandy
Honestly I'm so impressed of myself for reading this book, it making me cringe so bad. so this book is about a weeb with mental problem, his first response when he encounter problem is whining, the author said he is realistic and cautious, but he spill the knowledge that someone on lower realm shouldn't know to a person he just meet. he got a good cheat but his personality is a complete trash
3 months ago
1
EijiSeishuu
I just read 17 chapters and gave story development 3 stars and the rest 5 stars, because you forced him to change his personality with the force of the storyline and system. I hope you will continue with the initial MC personality because I was thinking "what will happen in the next storyline when fighting your enemy with such a personality and how to respond to the primitive thinking that only the strong can do anything in the cultivator world" so when I see the mc's personality being forced to change little by little it's a bit disappointing but I will try to continue reading this story *I hope there is nothing else that makes me disappointed*
3 months ago
1
Xander_Paz
el inicio estuvo bien, pero la verdad donde empezaste a mezclar fue donde siento que perdiste el rumbo.
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finally a fanfic where the MC doesn't try to take everything from the protagonist, and just wants to go home.
Reveal Spoiler
i should say it's great to see you back. its really great fanfic better than many others but you have to update really stably you were away for how many months
Please make MC killing Yun Che[img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous]
As much as. i want to put this lower because the family being put in i can't best Atg i read in awhile but he just had to bring them here and now it feels like multiple mc's i wish the best of luck and well see if i can find something simmilar without the family being in...
Amazing work author, I am sure you can improve even more. Just hope that the harem is not just a vase but actually powerful and can fight and help MC.
Whats the raw name? And dont say its original cause you often mistake profound for ground a quite a few times in the same chapter. That is a mistake done by automatic tranlations
Reveal Spoiler
I don't know of others for me the novel title is unappealing .........in this world humans are already at top. though the novel is good 👍 keep it up author
Os primeiros 15 capítulos são bem chatos e irritantes de se ler, mais depois disso até que fica bem interessante. Estou atualmente no capitulo 25, e esta tomando um rumo bem interessante.
I've come back to see the restart of this fanfic, thanks for not giving up on it, good luck! .....................................................
Honestly I'm so impressed of myself for reading this book, it making me cringe so bad. so this book is about a weeb with mental problem, his first response when he encounter problem is whining, the author said he is realistic and cautious, but he spill the knowledge that someone on lower realm shouldn't know to a person he just meet. he got a good cheat but his personality is a complete trash
I just read 17 chapters and gave story development 3 stars and the rest 5 stars, because you forced him to change his personality with the force of the storyline and system. I hope you will continue with the initial MC personality because I was thinking "what will happen in the next storyline when fighting your enemy with such a personality and how to respond to the primitive thinking that only the strong can do anything in the cultivator world" so when I see the mc's personality being forced to change little by little it's a bit disappointing but I will try to continue reading this story *I hope there is nothing else that makes me disappointed*
el inicio estuvo bien, pero la verdad donde empezaste a mezclar fue donde siento que perdiste el rumbo.