The Fallen Gamer (MarvelxDXDxMulticross)

I'm liking everything so far. Nice, unique AU. A fun MC with a well thought out background. The writing quality is very good. Nearly perfect. Some small mistakes, but nothing that ruins the story. Can't wait for more.

Good story with a unique start. I especially liked that the mc embraced her new identity and how her being an angel effects others reactions. However the author needs to explain the nerfs and buffs the main character and villains are getting. There are a lot of times me and other readers were confused for a lot of the fights because the mc would beat up villains a few chapters before with no effort only to struggle against someone they shouldn’t. For example either Voldemort was buffed and we weren’t told or there is some confusion on the authors part when it comes to DXD angels or HP wizards and their power levels and how they would face against each other, never-mind an angel with a gamer system. Now this could be explained by the author in a few ways one such way would be to reason that hp wizards are stronger because they had to face other wizards and marvel threats that normal HP wizards wouldn’t, However this story lacks that and would be much better with it. Still for a webnovel fanfic this is good quality with no grammer mistakes and a female mc, that is rare. I just wish the author would explain or respond to the confusion of the readers (also ps hope you dont make this mc yuri only as most other stories do it because they are genderbender fics and it would be refreshing to see a non yuri exclusive female mc)

This story’s about what you’d expect from someone who had a fun idea in their head and decided to go with it. It’s a fun read. Just don’t take it too seriously.

Already liking this just from the first few chapters. I'll be sure to throw some stones your way.

when you finish the book at the end can you please write an epilogue.........................................................................................

well the writting was good and the consept was good but the aplication wasn't optimal

Easy to read, enjoyable and interesting. Can't wait for more! Hope it keeps updating regurarly and getting interesting as it has so far ....

Good its okay story there are few stupid things here and there like how most of the woman are yuri and how big mcs harem becomes, like to me only maybe number 1 and number 3 were okay and rest were litle too much, plus author adds a new universe crossover later on and there are few stupid villains but its okay

SHE HAS THE ORB OF Tentacle ****** HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

Super Fanfic

truly entertainment hopefully the sword gets a unique power

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Yo if anyone needs a suggestion to get into this book just know this is literally the only book that I WAIT on to be updated. it gets an update I'm here. chapter ends I'm sad 😂😂 Only book i actively am willing to drop everything for!

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