THE SIBLING'S REBELS
In the kingdom of Buffalo's in Seoul, there lived a royal family called the Eminent family. The Eminent family had control over the entire empire, but in this land of power, there was a male child born named Solomon. Shortly after, another child was born - a mighty boy named Samson.
These births caused an uproar in the kingdom, and the emperor became jealous. The emperor ordered that any child born with a buffalo's head symbol on their back should be killed immediately. The emperor knew from the past generations that mighty children were prone to rebellion.
Once Majesty Beckham seized control of the kingdom in an illegal way, he made several unpopular decrees. He banned the trading and eating of liquor, rice and pork. The citizens were outraged by this and began to protest. In response, Majesty Beckham ordered his guards to kill any who spoke out against him.
Meanwhile, the emperor's younger brother, Prince Henry, had secretly fathered a mighty child. When Majesty Beckham learned of this, he sent his guards to kill the child and his family. They narrowly escaped, fleeing to a secret cottage in the woods.
"After many years they had grown up, the two brothers finally returned to their hometown. They had been away for so long that they could barely remember what had happened there before. They were also angry about the ban on their father's property.
"As they entered the town, they noticed something strange. The people were acting strangely, whispering among themselves and looking worried. Some were even crying. The brothers looked at each other, these makes them got irritated and rebel against the act of the Emperor.
In the midst of their plans to overthrow the king, a revelation was made to them: one of the brothers was the rightful heir to the throne. There could be only one king, so the brothers became suspicious and confused. They wondered which of them was the "mighty child" prophesied by their ancestors - the one who would usher in an era of peace and prosperity for the kingdom.
The brothers, now grown men, returned to the palace to wage war and claim the throne. Samson, the mighty child, claimed he was the rightful successor, but Solomon, the elder brother, disagreed.
As Samson held the sword to his brother's neck, a tense silence fell over the crowd. The air was thick with the weight of the moment, as everyone held their breath, waiting to see what would happen next. The only sound was the pounding of Solomon's heart, as he stared into his brother's eyes, his own eyes wide with fear.
Then, the people wondered what would happen next. Would Samson follow through on his threat, or would he give in to his brother?
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Got a lot to say but less to write. This is history story, a great way to represent the conflict of the brothers for the throne. Liked the beginning and it was great way to read more and more. This book has a great potential waiting of us to read. The world building and the setting is well built, making us wander invincibly around the halls of the caste and streets of the capital. Great work author.
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The synopsis tells a lot about what to expect. A historical novel where there is conflict and a power struggle. Here, Wisdom and raw strength are being put to the test, and the bond of brotherhood is shaken as they try to decide who gets the throne.It is a interesting read, and I look forward to seeing how it unfolds. Waiting for more, chapters Author[img=update][img=recommend]
I like the relationship between the family ..relatable ...hahah! I would like to point out that the grammar can be leveled up (using uppercase in dialogues ), else the writing style is good . Keep up ! You got it !
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I love the synopsis. The moment I saw Seoul, I knew I'd love it. 😍
This book had me absolutely hooked. It's truly captivating, and I couldn't put it down. The story is intriguing, and I read the first few chapters in one go. Highly recommended to anyone who enjoys a good read. You'd regret missing out on such an incredible story!
my respected author, your plot are good and i already have the mind reading you heading to, like in the scripture, in which Solomon was gifted with wisdom while Samson killed many as a thousand of soldier then, it happening in this story, i know it did be interesting when i set my eyes on it, keep it up [img=coins] awaiting
The story is filled with elements of suspense and tension, especially when one brother holds a sword to the other's neck, leaving the outcome uncertain. Those who love historical story especially located in Seoul, this is a must!
well i wouldn't lie to you i love 😘 the title of the novel and also the graphics design of the novel well i would give it to you a job well done ✅👍 and i know that you can still do better i believe in you dude keep on going
That's really a good one. I enjoyed reading it. Can't read to read more. Even i write if you like you can check it out. Do you have a editor as you wrote it very well.
Pretty strong start! The setting descriptions are top knotch, and the characters here all have heir own stories to tell. Breaking up the info dumps would make this a lot better though but otherwise....keep it up!
well I have lot to say, but I will keep it short, the writing is good and the flow with words is good, it is a historical novel with conflicts and I can say from the synopsis that there will be wars. Just one thing that although synopsis gives a good and clear idea about the story, it is still very long so most people won't read the whole and just go in the story directly or just leave so keep it short while still intriguing, keep up author.
I think you just summarized the entire book in the synopsis. LolBut just from that, if the author plays his cards well, this is going to be a great book.
Wow! I'm living in a peaceful era right now, but I can't just take this story off my mind!The story needs more attention, and thumbs up to the author, keep it up!