Nullified (Null)

This is a translation right ? anyone knows the original name ? anyway nice translation. but i want to compare it with the original to see if it's worth paying on patreon.

Really and really nice. Very good improvement from the previous plot from Overlord. Although there are still some things here and there but nothing major, just some things to grind up with experience. I liked how this time the Waifus didn't come up from nowhere after a time skip. We got to see how they met and then talked and yada yada. I would recommend, though, to make the Mc change the plot more. In the first verse, he almost didn't even participate, and we just got to read the whole dbz story. But in danmachi, he started changing things, and it instantly made it livelier. So more of it would be nice(although what's most important is what you want with YOUR novel, so trust yourself and the process) Anyway, very good improvement. I hope you can become better and finish a wonderful book. P.S. I left some comments in the chapter underlining the spelling/formulation mistakes. I can help you with them if you want to.

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Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.

please continue this novel and please skip Naruto arc it's really boring

this is quite a good fanfic , keep it up author 👍🏼

I really enjoy reading it. please keep up👍👍👍

Really good ff and interesting story. I really hope that this story will be updated and not discontinued. The grammar is really good and this is the kind of story i would reread when im bored because its so good. If you are new to this ff i would recommend it!

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This book is great, i recommend others to read but I wish you wouldn't post 5 chapters only once every 3 to 4 weeks.

Good job and keep it up would like to more works from you like this one.

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