Beyond Invincible

Your writing captivated me from the very beginning. Your meticulous attention to grammar not only enhances the clarity of your writing but also reflects the respect you have for your fic. Your vivid scene descriptions make it easier to imagine what's happening, allowing me to immerse myself fully in the story. Moreover, the concept of the story is both compelling and thought-provoking, and I find myself wanting more. I have read your previous work and I hope you continue writing.

I feel like this is writtwn by AI. It's got a lot of the qualities that AI use when writing like information being repeated several times over before going on to the next thing and also language that most people just don't use when writing. It's an interesting concept so far even if it is AI generated so I'll keep reading and might change my review later. One last thing author if it is assisted by AI maybe just go through and proof read it so that you don't repeat the same thing so much.

Cool idea, I'll save this one for later when I have time to read a new story. I'm hoping the MC still has some of that omni man in him. Omni man was my favorite character in the series regardless of the fact that he was the bad guy.

this novel is incredibly loyal and accurate to the source material and creates that same feeling of tension that the show did, while being different at the same time.