Smart-ass in Naruto

This novel seems very promising to me, and I wonder when the hero will become strong. Anyway, keep going, I'm very optimistic about this.🙂👌

Will there be romance, and if so, will there be a harem? Also I was wondering if you will continue it or abandon it like your other works.

A sincere review. ===== Writing Quality: So far, excellent. It provides enough immersion, so I won’t even try to complain about any possible mistakes. I’m not the type to analyze every piece just to find a misplaced letter. [5.0] ===== Stability of Updates: So far, excellent. In six days, eight chapters have been released, which is already an extremely high amount. [5.0] ===== Story Development: It appears to have a slow development. The protagonist doesn’t have an absurd amount of power or any strong ability like most protagonists usually do. It’s extremely interesting, but I have some concerns. A protagonist needs to be a protagonist in the end, whether we like it or not. I’ll wait for more chapters to see if he will have something that justifies calling him the protagonist (whether now or in the future). Aside from this small issue, the story’s development has been solid so far. [4.0] ===== Character Design: The protagonist has a genuine brain so far. Other characters... well, they exist. No complex evaluation of the supporting characters yet—I’ll wait for them to have their moments before judging anything. For now, the protagonist is capable of generating some entertainment. [4.0] ===== World Background: Good enough? Well, it’s Naruto. And as far as I’ve seen, there haven’t been any major changes to the original story, so any reader can easily find their way around. I won’t judge this category irrationally since there are only eight chapters. In a future review (which will replace this one), when more chapters exist, I’ll make a more complete assessment of this category. [5.0] ===== Additional Notes (translation: my personal thoughts, in a more personal way): As I said, the protagonist doesn’t seem like a protagonist to me—at least, not yet. And I know that the focus of the story is that he has no talent or any super-powerful trait, which is exactly why I’m not giving a worse rating (purely personal opinion), because that’s the entire purpose of this story. My only fear is that the author won’t be able to make the protagonist interesting enough while keeping him talentless. Or that he’ll give the protagonist some minimally interesting ability and call it his "own power." Even something like chakra regeneration or enormous vitality already belongs to other clans. So… good luck? Final Score: 4.6/5.0. The work definitely has potential. And so far, it’s really good. Don’t pay too much attention to my personal comments (after all, it’s just my own taste). I recommend giving it a chance to see what you, other readers, think. And please, keep up the excellent work, Author~!

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Pretty good the mc has a brain, the story has nice development so far. Grammar is also good. That’s it I don’t really have anything else to say it’s a good story so far.

Will this have a advance technology or research on chakra/bloodline?