Reincarnated as Ancestor of a Great Clan
--Note: 4 to 8 chapters/per week will all be released on Sunday at once --
In the vast and mystical realm of the Cultivation World, on the Southern Divine Continent, the Great Li Clan stands as a powerful force, known for its history and lineage of formidable cultivators. At the helm of the clan is one of its ancestors, Li Tian, a stoic and dedicated cultivator who has recently achieved the coveted realm of the Half Immortal stage.
Li Tian's ascension, however, brings about unexpected changes; he can now remember his past life as a person born on earth.
married to two remarkable women, Lin Hua and Chen Lian.
Because of this, his own life dynamically changes as he, a cold person, now comes to understand the value of relationships.
He becomes an indomitable force, surpassing all limits and emerging as an overpowering presence within the cultivation world. This enthralling tale unfolds amidst the backdrop of the Cultivation World
-overpowered. checked
-R18. checked
-Cultivation world. checked
-Action. checked
The story looks interesting but it suffers from over-description. For example, you introduce an idea and then proceed to expand it by writting exactly the same but with more complex words. At least a quarter of the chapter is repeted or redundant information.
This is really well paced and well written Although the author is obviously new he shows potential
hello readers, i am back atleast For now, i will just edit the released chapters and remove all the extra description. I know that all my chapters have more of that description and all so for now, I will only focus on them and after that, I will see if I should write the chapter at what interval, as you should know that in Japanese novels, chapters are written in like 1 month 1 chapter and after a volume is ended, it will be after 6 months or a year the next volume will be started. So think of those 26 chapters as the 1st volume and from now on I will at least make 2 to 3 chapters in a month. and I am giving it 5 stars because I will give my all to write the novel and if there is some problem in a chapter and readers don't like the progress of the story, then I will just rewrite it all again and again. If there is not much character development, then I will add a novel that will be a slice-of-life version of this novel. And if you guys asked me to change something in the novel and if the change will make the story better, then I will just make that change. This will be a very slow novel
guys I want to continue this story very much but 😭 but I don't get the time for world building . I want this novel to be a perfect one so in the near future I will restart writing the novel once again but for now this novel will be paused. I will start writing another novel it will basically be a translation of a mtl novel and I will try that all the key components different.