Will of embers

This is goooooood Hiruzen isn’t just randomly omnipotent all of a sudden and he actually works to make changes and improvements. A fresh read fr keep it up

That was the best Web novel Fanfiction I read this month, period. it was so captivating I burned my tongue while eating, good job. this is a great new idea which have never been introduced before, I applaud it 👏, well done and keep it up

This fanfic is worth reading, the fresh idea amazed me every time i read this one. Read it guys, it is absolutely one of the best fanfic in this time. I hope the author can finish it until the end

It's a very good fanfic, I hope you continue to write this book.‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

Writing quality is good, The premise is also really great as well as the character. They all feel like og and Mc is making really good development.

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This fic is too good to just read and ignored it,so here's my review!. Wrinting quaility is well written.. or maybe I just have poor english. The plot also is Outstanding, I can't compare it with any fanfiction because this fanfic is different from other. In conclusion ..Good fanfic! Deserve to be praise! sorry for my bad english

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Yess I need more. The premise has me hooked and I'm already drawn in by the first chapter. Absolutely reading this.

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I feel disappointed every time I see that I am close to reaching the last updated chapters. This novel is a masterpiece, one of the best things I have read about Naruto anime. I hope that it will not be dropped in the future.(English not my first language)

What a gem of a story! So good. Loved every chapter.

MORE!!!!!!!!