Naruto: The beast of war
Kayomi is no ordinary child. Reincarnated into the body of a 5-year-old, he’s inherited the abilities of the Inuzuka and Uchiha clans—but something else has awakened within him. A strange system now gives him quests and rewards, pushing him to grow stronger while testing his limits. As he navigates the complex ninja world, the system’s cryptic challenges force him to reevaluate his purpose. Will Kayomi embrace the power the system offers, or will he fight to maintain control of his humanity as a deadly war approaches?
P.S. Although this story features the common tropes of a cliché system and an overpowered main character, I assure you it’s a captivating read. Taking inspiration from "Wind Calamity" by Devil_hex, I’ve infused my own creativity and perspective into this fanfic. I encourage you to dive in and share any thoughts or suggestions you have I would love your feedback!
[ Note ]
I do not own naruto or any characters of the verse and this is a fan creation
Shameless Reader Review, hehehe, I simply like it, i give it, Do whatever i want. 5 stars to a great story, hope it reach it's grand completion.
I highly recommend you start using Grammarly. It's free and helps with common writing issues, such as capitalization, quotations, missing words, punctuation, spelling, etc. I'd also recommend reading other people's novels to see how they write. It's always good to have references for inspiration or to piggyback on some ideas. 2/5.
The plot is interesting The start is a bit shaky but overall has potential especially the latest chapter's
I really like this story makes me wanna read more so keep going please 🥺
since rewriting it is a lot better and I hope you guys feel the same way as well have fun reading.