"Behind Bars" is a screenplay that tells the story of Efe a 19-year-old genius who was framed for a drug-related crime while on his way to pursue a better life abroad. Efe is sentenced to prison, plunging him into a world of despair and misery. The screenplay delves deep into the struggles of a troubled teenager and the ripple effect of his actions on those around him.
"Behind Bars" is a thought-provoking piece that sheds light on the everyday life of average teenagers surrounded by the school system, societal challenges that confront teenagers and how these troubled youth navigate through popular culture amidst a surfeit of options.
I love how organized the writer is. Being able to identify and recognize characters, places and events, is a big turn-on when reading stories as complex as scripts. I gave you a 5-star rating because your story reflects a lot of professionalism and secondly, I loved how you arranged your scenes making it easy to keep the readers curious.
I want to first commend the writers ability to play and use literally devices when and where they are needed. I love that the story seem told from a realistic point of view. And he has his way with words seeing a drama on Web Novel is weird I won't lie🤣 but it's exactly what caught my attention. I like that this is different and unique. My favorite Character for now is Cheta I always controversial characters. They always create tension and make the story interesting.
This gave me that Netflix vibes. I pray this story really makes it to screen. Although the story is still new but it seems to be getting a lot of attention. It has feature Twice on Web Novel Stories of the Week. For a Nigerian story, this is amazing. Also want to mention that “Behind Bars” is one of the most organised scripts I have read. Keep up the good work, Mr Alordiah
Not what i expected but i even got to see something much more exciting and different. Most importantly i must commend the authors style of writing. Behind Bars was nothing like the regular drama. The story is very engaging. Also i want to comment his or her her use of suspense and dramatic irony. Maybe this is because i am a Nigerian but i think this story is probably the most realistic and outstanding Teen fiction i have read in a while. I can't wait to see how every Event unfolds.
This is a great storyline so far. The plotting is unique and I can tell that the writer put in a lot of work into this. The plot is mature and the characters in place.
Probably the most mature Teen Fiction I have seen in a long time on this space. It's relieving to read something outside the usual cliché and stereotype these days. This story is proof that there are still writers out there who are still willing to think creatively outside the box and still dare to put such an exceptional story out here. The style is rare and completely new and I love it. The style was the first thing that pulled me in. The plot is something worth talking about too. I can't wait to see how Zino gets revenge for what the company did to her brother and how Efe intends to get the prototype while he struggles to stay alive in prison. It's a perfect read if you are looking for something out of the box and new.
I wanted to wait till the whole story was completed but I think with what I have read so far, it's obvious this is different. The story engaging and suspenseful I'm in love with the Efe character because of the conflict the writer built around him. it's overwhelming but still I love it🤣😪 I also think Isio is a very sensitive character that reflects the common nature of the average troubled youth. I'm so curious on how the writer intends to connect all the ends together(The company, Efe, Zino, Winner Academy and Buhigh Prison) because if he does it right which so far I think he would, then this might just end up becoming one of the best story on this platform despite the unpopular style it was written in which I like because for the first time I was reading something similar to the feeling I get when I'm watching a thriller movie filled with a lot of suspense and chaos. The style paints a picture of every scene in your head. Though people with low level of imagination would not relate to this... Lol.