HP: The Necromancer

This novels not bad, the only thing to majorly critique about would be the lack of editing done after the translation, its really hard to follow the flow of events or descriptions of things, TBH i only made it through two chapters before I couldn't stand to piece it together as I was reading, maybe it gets better as chapters go on, but I doubt it.

A unique character insert in the Harry Potter world with magic that is not really explored in other fanfics. It has a great start and solid translations. Just started reading, but would recommend that you give it a try.

I like the story, the translation is good all in all solid story. Can you please link the original story,

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interesting story concept, love the teacher type books and how they include investigation into the mix to figure out relations and trouble

Good story and all but it is hard to read. Most likely because it is a translation and idioms often dont translate well. Also for quite a while I was confused at why they keep switching the name from Henry and Anthony until the sorting ceremony.

its boring. nothing happens. he teaches muggle studies poorly, and once every 20 chapters or so he uses a spell, usually for something meaningless to the story. the necromancy part of the story is basically just his weird skeleton cat that has fur and his pet wraith chicken. literally nothing happens ever.

A very interesting story that I want to see continue. Calls Fang, Tooth for some reason. Would like to see more of the Necromancer aspect of the character. Maybe have him act as a medium to help ghost and the dead get justice or peace. Maybe use that to try and get the Ministry of Magic to see that there’s a good side to Necromancy as well as the bad just like any other magic. Update is kinda splotchy. Will be gone for ”awhile” and then appear with a few updates on the same day and then disappear again. Not a uniform amount of chapters when it comes to the batch uploads.

Very slow burn, the beginning chapters were very rough but the translation slowly got better it ends up around a little above average not the best translation. The story is pretty good but like I said it’s a slow burn

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A premissa é interessante, Mas a história é lenta de mais sem emoção com personagens emburecidos. Não vale apena a leitura. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

I would like to start off by saying similar to the ancient ruins professor the story is slow but the weight of each chapter is not to be overlooked. I always feel there is something important happening or there is some progress being made. I don't really understand the main character type of necromancy but seeing how authror is cleanly working necromancy into the story i quite like it and hope it can continue to be as steady as this.

A really good story. The writing qualitat is consistent and a new interesting concept.