This is a translated work of "Uchiha Destroys Konoha at the Start."
After being reborn into the Naruto world, Kaito finds himself as a member of the Uchiha clan. With the night of extermination looming, Uchiha Kaito is left powerless, without a golden finger or system to guide him.
"How am I supposed to protect my clan?"
Just when all seems lost, Ding! The system finally awakens!
Ding! "Host’s Kekkei Genkai has reached a bottleneck!"
Ding! "Jonin-level chakra detected. Upgrading to Kage-level!"
Ding! "Fire Style: Fireball Technique (B) has reached a bottleneck. Advancing to Fire Style: Great Fireball Technique (A)!"
With the system now in play, Kaito must rise to protect his clan and change the tragic fate of the Uchiha.
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I really enjoyed this book waiting for more chapters to be released, and it is spoiler-free i really enjoy Uchiha's and Kaito's revenge against Leaf Village.
So far my fav book. I am waiting for Uchiha's Revenge. Looking forward to Kaito's future with Uchiha, Are they gonna leave Konoha and make their own village or Is Uchiha gonna see a new hokage with their clansmen... very excited for the future of this book.
The shameless translator here :) Everyone rates their work, so why not? So here's a heads-up for anyone reading: I worked pretty hard on the MTL and the Chinese versions of this story. I may have lost a few brain cells due to the brain rot of MTL, but I put in the effort. There might be some issues, so feel free to point them out, and I will correct them. HOWEVER, if you come straight out trashing my translation, I won't hold back. Please provide a constructive argument for why something doesn't work rather than just calling it trash. Also, this isn’t a station where you just announce your departure without saying anything <.< Now to the story, MC is a neutral guy, he will unite five nations, and recruit talented people on his side. So look forward to it
A single fight taking over 20 chapters is beyond silly. The amount of fillers is disgusting
Translation is a lot better then the other version, but there are still too many mistakes and it really breaks the flow of the story. A lot of seemingly missing or incorrect words and the grammar is also not great.
Why there is a villain tag and also a righteous tag too? Is he a villain or what?
Not bad, too few chapters, translation pace far too slow, average quality (odd phrasing and some of the wording seems off to me), although the subject is really good, it's another uchiha fanfic with the MC seriously defending his clan. I'd say it's a good read if this theme is to your taste and if you don't mind a very slow publication rate.
I tried reading the other translation, and it gave me a whole new level of respect for your work. The other translation borders on being incomprehensible
god this chinese fic is absolutely horrible. the translation is nice, but the plot is absolute bullshit. the protagonist starts warning clan members at the night of the massacre about the danger and they instantly believe him, with a 'voice in the crowd' saying the clan was outnumbered??? absolute completely trashy nonsensical bullshit.a
may man, good job for translation of this fanfic as this is really giving you a headache, the story is good even in slow paced, but can you replace the other name of the other skills set as others is exaggerated or the name of the jutsu's or like, sorry i know im demanding and thank you for updating the chapter. Good luck
Please keep writing this novel it’s very good I hope you keep writing it!!!!!!!!! 🥳
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Overall, the story is intriguing, with a unique take on the Uchiha clan's revenge and a system-driven narrative that adds an RPG-like twist. The translation quality is solid, making it easy to follow along without any significant language issues, which is definitely a plus. However, the pacing could use some improvement. The fight scenes, particularly the battles involving Hiruzen and Danzo, feel like they drag on for too many chapters. This slows down the overall flow of the story, and the villains, while well-written, sometimes come off as one-dimensional. Despite that, it's an enjoyable read for fans of the Uchiha clan and those who like system-based stories.
Ok new review , so i read till latest chapters , and this ff quality dropped than increased. I hope the fight didnt drag on too long. Spoiler alert: I'm book wise its a good for time pass but it leaves something in mouth like i wish it would be not too preditable. So yeah
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i hope Itachi uchia and his parents come clean and I also hope they don't die