This is actually my first fanfic so bear with me.
I hope i get better at writing
a year ago
2
Aseyder
You should rewrite the first few chapters this novel has good potential and could be something truly great once you get rid of small spelling errors and the like
10 days ago
0
Ardent_Hope
this is the most honest review you'll get, so this is the second review and am still not sure if this novel is good, there is not that much character development but am trying to keep pace with the numerous characters so please bear with me, the mind game might be also be confusing but I assure you that I'll answer all questions.
This is actually my first fanfic so bear with me. I hope i get better at writing
You should rewrite the first few chapters this novel has good potential and could be something truly great once you get rid of small spelling errors and the like
this is the most honest review you'll get, so this is the second review and am still not sure if this novel is good, there is not that much character development but am trying to keep pace with the numerous characters so please bear with me, the mind game might be also be confusing but I assure you that I'll answer all questions.