The novel is interesting and good, worth your time, there are some drawbacks in the form of grammar and the speed of events. But since the author is a beginner, this is forgivable and in terms of grammar there have been changes for the better. I would like to wish the author good luck in writing a novel and in promoting his novel. Author, I have a question for you: will there be Yuri in the novel, I hope not?
The novel is interesting and good, worth your time, there are some drawbacks in the form of grammar and the speed of events. But since the author is a beginner, this is forgivable and in terms of grammar there have been changes for the better. I would like to wish the author good luck in writing a novel and in promoting his novel. Author, I have a question for you: will there be Yuri in the novel, I hope not?