In Another World With My Building Skills

Hello there everyone greetings! I'm a new writer and author I hope you guys enjoy my first ever longest and first ever published novel I know there are a few misunderstanding and mistakes you guys can comment about it because I'm new I hope I can learn more from you guys, and don't forget to review and vote power stone it help me a lot as a new writer thank you so much everyone I hope you guys understand

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the writing quality is a perfection even the grammar the story was unique including the skills he the main character have even the story development is great looking forward for more chapters

4.8 out of 5 you know the story sometimes a bit you know but it is amazing im looking forward for more chapters, It's not boring the character design is great including the unique abilities he had

I see that the story is discontinued probably because it's missing a lot of details. I love overpowered stories like this, but it's like you went to one subject to the next without hardly any context. You need to add more details to the characters and what he's doing. where's the villain of story you mentioned a tyrant magician, but I can hardly believe if he is attacking nearby territories that he would simply leave the mc alone to build his kingdom? I get that it appears that you're trying to create a slice of life story, but you are too fast. Keep jumping from one thing after another with hardly any details. if you plan on redoing this book, I suggest that you make sure that there are details in the novel.

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okay I actually love the the idea for the book, the grammar is great no mistakes from what I've seen so far but I'm wondering why he's going saying he remembers his past life like its not like he just telling some close people but literally almost everyone, and also in the beginning when he went to village that was attacked why didn't they never talk about the people that attacked them.

yeah it was great recommended🥳🥳 if this novel competing for the contest give this at least 3rd place

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