The Lonely and The Madman

The Lonely and The Madman

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Author: TheSilentSnow
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Crystal Samuels has lived her entire life alone, until now that is. But one of her friends is hiding something, and another one is helping him. Will Crystal be able to discover their secret, or will she fail and live in isolation for the rest of her life?

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reah_andeng
reah_andeng

I see no problem so far except on the writers 'show, don't tell' factor. Many beginner authors have probelem with this so it's very understandable and over all pretty great! keep it up author

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lemonyzcelia
lemonyzcelia

This is actually pretty good. I like the author and the pov point stuff. Great writing actually from writer but should or could work on your show and tell skills. Over all good!

3 months ago
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