i like how the story is going and how the mc ain't gonna stay with her.
a month ago
12
Winter_Whisperer
Writing Quality - 5 🌟
While there is room for improvement, it's sufficiently good that any grammar mistakes and other issues are not noticeable.
Story Development - 4 🌟
I enjoyed how the story was unfolding. However, I think adding more details and background information would make it even better. Currently, it feels a bit rushed, but with more depth, it can be fantastic.
Character Design - 5 🌟
I love his character. He has a very mature outlook in life which I think needs to be appreciated in more novels.
Updating Stability - 5 🌟
No issues here.
World Background - 4 🌟
In my opinion, this is what needs the most improvement. More details and descriptions could elevate this novel to even further heights.
Good luck to the author.
a month ago
7
Uzumaki_Kushina_21
author is this your original or MTL ???[img=update][img=update][img=update]
a month ago
7
GetReligion
GARNT THIS HAS YOU WRITTEN ALL OVER IT, LET IT END!
a month ago
6
DaoistaR8ZU5
Nice very nice. The story is very good i like that. I hope you can continue fast the story. I looking forward to that ..........................sjjdndkdndkdkndkdmdkdpkkdodkdjdodkdkdokdndkdjdndnkdjfnrj
a month ago
5
cult
[Honest review]
Fun to read. :)
[20/07/24]
15 days ago
3
Miyuki_1963
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20 days ago
3
Anmol_Shrestha_7840
I like this story a lot pls author dont drop this
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a month ago
3
Kim_Frank
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a month ago
3
Raul_vaz
lesgooooooo plz plz plz keep updating everday
a month ago
3
Cronos_8A
So far it's been a great story with good development of the characters and their intentions, I hope the author continues and doesn't let it fall apart
19 days ago
2
Nur689
Good John Lennon imagine cup cake for the following code geas to start downloading the best full version free music search engine free no pico
a month ago
2
Harcourt_Miller_6099
So good so far even though there aren’t much chapters yet….it’s still pretty good
a month ago
2
Monarch_Shadows
I really like it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
i like how the story is going and how the mc ain't gonna stay with her.
Writing Quality - 5 🌟 While there is room for improvement, it's sufficiently good that any grammar mistakes and other issues are not noticeable. Story Development - 4 🌟 I enjoyed how the story was unfolding. However, I think adding more details and background information would make it even better. Currently, it feels a bit rushed, but with more depth, it can be fantastic. Character Design - 5 🌟 I love his character. He has a very mature outlook in life which I think needs to be appreciated in more novels. Updating Stability - 5 🌟 No issues here. World Background - 4 🌟 In my opinion, this is what needs the most improvement. More details and descriptions could elevate this novel to even further heights. Good luck to the author.
author is this your original or MTL ???[img=update][img=update][img=update]
GARNT THIS HAS YOU WRITTEN ALL OVER IT, LET IT END!
Nice very nice. The story is very good i like that. I hope you can continue fast the story. I looking forward to that ..........................sjjdndkdndkdkndkdmdkdpkkdodkdjdodkdkdokdndkdjdndnkdjfnrj
[Honest review] Fun to read. :) [20/07/24]
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I like this story a lot pls author dont drop this . . . . . . . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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lesgooooooo plz plz plz keep updating everday
So far it's been a great story with good development of the characters and their intentions, I hope the author continues and doesn't let it fall apart
Good John Lennon imagine cup cake for the following code geas to start downloading the best full version free music search engine free no pico
So good so far even though there aren’t much chapters yet….it’s still pretty good
I really like it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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