Once upon time I was a normal guy. Now, I am Kakarot, the clone of Son Goku created by Kami. There isn't much time, but I'll use it wisely, and go even further beyond.
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Time to read another good fanfiction.
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4 years ago
732
0_Jordinio_0
It seems you won't go down even at this level, huh my rival? Fine then, you'll love this. I'll show you a level you haven't seen yet. This is to Go Even Further Beyond!
MC clones himself and clones make out with his gf. I am personally not into that so i dropped it. Its not as if they are the same person or anything like that, the clones have complete sentience and free will. He didnt even know the clone did it till the clone said it. Other than this, its an amazing fanfic that I did enjoy. Give it a chance and if it crosses your line then just stop reading and dont try to insult the author.
Short: MC has sentient clones, otherwise great fanfic.
4 years ago
173
DAOIST_SUPREME
Too much internal monologue and almost no progress in the story or interaction with the characters, it ends up getting pretty boring (my opinion)
4 years ago
59
Kais_Imperium
Its a good fanfic but add NTR tag since mc's clones (who have full sentience) make out with his girlfriend. Word count balalalalalalalalalalallalala
4 years ago
18
Shortex_12
A truly great story, I don't know how to even start describing it so you should definitely try it, I'm sure you'll love it, or at the very least enjoy it, keep up the good work author!
4 years ago
18
DaoistJB
This story has an unique plot which gave it plenty of potential. Unfortunately it is written by an toxic author who does everything in his power to ruin this story. He actively goes against his readers wishes to trigger them and ruin the story just to have his fun. And sometimes he rolls dice to decide important plot desicions...
2 years ago
16
Danang_R
i don't know why.when i see mc sudden power upgrade it's satisfying.........................................................................
4 years ago
16
RDAT
one of the better dbz self inserts as others either went to the route of adding too much stuff from other fiction to make it better or over use the balls way beyond their limit in use
We all know how this is going to go, its another book made by Jordi and to be honest its hella entertaining as usual. The only somewhat problematic topic about it is the issue about clones, if you wanna know what the clone issue is then go read it yourself because issue regarding clones is kinda a grey area and its up to the readers to decide whether or not clones hugging people is cuckery. I have my own beliefs and interpretation regarding that part of the novel but I'm not gonna judge and its up to the reader to decide.
4 years ago
8
Lord_Potadoe
i wont lie, the mc is much smarter than the actual one or even other character, as lustful as he is at least he is much better than those in the original timeline!
4 years ago
7
Deminster
This DBZ fanfic is quite good if you like an op mc and harem then this fanfic is for you. Writing is good and updates of this novel is quite frequent
right now so problem in that story development is good just mc gets overpowered quite easily but author has given its reason for making mc OP (I quite like the Kakarot character as he is opposite of Goku but more as mc cheat is just the knowledge of future and i am just loving it if the author can complete the fanfic i say it will be quite good read )
Time to read another good fanfiction. ............................................................. ....... . ................................
It seems you won't go down even at this level, huh my rival? Fine then, you'll love this. I'll show you a level you haven't seen yet. This is to Go Even Further Beyond!
Android 21 Pleeaaaseeeeee.....................................................................................................................
MC clones himself and clones make out with his gf. I am personally not into that so i dropped it. Its not as if they are the same person or anything like that, the clones have complete sentience and free will. He didnt even know the clone did it till the clone said it. Other than this, its an amazing fanfic that I did enjoy. Give it a chance and if it crosses your line then just stop reading and dont try to insult the author. Short: MC has sentient clones, otherwise great fanfic.
Too much internal monologue and almost no progress in the story or interaction with the characters, it ends up getting pretty boring (my opinion)
Its a good fanfic but add NTR tag since mc's clones (who have full sentience) make out with his girlfriend. Word count balalalalalalalalalalallalala
A truly great story, I don't know how to even start describing it so you should definitely try it, I'm sure you'll love it, or at the very least enjoy it, keep up the good work author!
This story has an unique plot which gave it plenty of potential. Unfortunately it is written by an toxic author who does everything in his power to ruin this story. He actively goes against his readers wishes to trigger them and ruin the story just to have his fun. And sometimes he rolls dice to decide important plot desicions...
i don't know why.when i see mc sudden power upgrade it's satisfying.........................................................................
one of the better dbz self inserts as others either went to the route of adding too much stuff from other fiction to make it better or over use the balls way beyond their limit in use
Reveal Spoiler
꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!
We all know how this is going to go, its another book made by Jordi and to be honest its hella entertaining as usual. The only somewhat problematic topic about it is the issue about clones, if you wanna know what the clone issue is then go read it yourself because issue regarding clones is kinda a grey area and its up to the readers to decide whether or not clones hugging people is cuckery. I have my own beliefs and interpretation regarding that part of the novel but I'm not gonna judge and its up to the reader to decide.
i wont lie, the mc is much smarter than the actual one or even other character, as lustful as he is at least he is much better than those in the original timeline!
This DBZ fanfic is quite good if you like an op mc and harem then this fanfic is for you. Writing is good and updates of this novel is quite frequent right now so problem in that story development is good just mc gets overpowered quite easily but author has given its reason for making mc OP (I quite like the Kakarot character as he is opposite of Goku but more as mc cheat is just the knowledge of future and i am just loving it if the author can complete the fanfic i say it will be quite good read )