Yin , a handsome teenager who loves video games actually founds himself stuck in one , called parallel city.
later yin gets to choose his abilities and starts levelling up , but still not strong enough , a weak player in the midst of higher players.
now he is only determined in getting into fights and win , get more skills and abilities to prove he's not as weak as they say.
To be honest, you need to rewrite the whole thing, your spelling grammar, synopsis, capitalism etc you also need to expand on the Overall world system other wise its a pretty solid book