Traveling through time and space to become the protagonist of the Ninja World, Uzumaki Xin activated the heaven-defying enlightenment system, he can create everything from scratch, make miracles with one snap of his finger, change the destiny of anyone he sees, and most importantly is he can create the most powerful family that no one ever sees or hear.
This is the story of the rise of a fallen family from ash and taking revenge on those who betrayed them.
"Will of Fire?"
"I will show you what fire is."
"The Will of Uzumaki, Bankai: Ryūjin Jakka!"
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The concept is good but the writing is so trash
Uzumaki: I Can't Comprehend Anything This story needs someone to proof read or GPT
the story is pretty good, but the writing I really bad. still readable
This story is fanfic of a fanfic, weak. I read a similar plot where Mc ask for mass shadow clone and shadow explosion; using gorilla tactic, hit and run, and night harrasment tactic.
why the heck Chinese people are obsessed with child soldiers. This could have been entertaining if not for child soldiers and child mc
Overall, a good story which can be great. Just the author needs to upgrade the writing skills & for that 1 star is cut-off. All The Best.
Good try but the translation is very poor the story is mildly interesting I doubt the translator will go back and fix any of the many errors In the spelling
I hate chinese novel and fanfiction. webnovel is full of this garbage
impossible to read without getting a headache.... It's legible, but almost every paragraph is messed up. It's obviously translated quite poorly.
Was a cool premise at first but it just turns into kingdombuilding shit
As much as I'd love to give this book the highest rating, could you at least try to improve its quality. You're still a novice when it comes to translating, hell i can't even read this fanfiction🤦🤦
love the story, The only problem is I can't stand the writing
the English is a pain to read. the story is good, but the number of mistakes and those of those types that actually confuse people while reading make it a suffering to read. please use grammarly or something to fix your text
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Author loves to suckle the garbage teat. Their writing so low quality trash is like gold. They should proof read or use Deepseek or ChatGPT to mask their lack of skill.