I Killed The Main Characters

Time for Review No. 2 as of writing 174 chapters :] This book starts off a bit slow and can be complicated, with many different perspectives that might confuse readers who stop at certain points. However, if you read further, it becomes easier to understand and enjoy. A big pro is that while there are characters who love the main character, there's no harem. In summary, if you're patient, the story pays off! I know most readers will complain about certain points and characters and progression of the story and I do understand that I should've taken more time in developing the main character further. But even so I didn't want the other characters to feel 2D sort of and not have the world revolve around the MC. All in all some will enjoy the work other s won't and that's completely fine and okay. Maybe my next works will be for you :) Happy Reading!! ✨

This novel sucks. Not funny. (Plz transport me inside of novel author kun. I will give u anything )

(this novel is great you should read it ) for the writing is flawless for the character it great but until now l only seen the mc well l don't know for other characters but for the mc is great character for story development is actually good now we about see mc ability for the update again is actually good but we need moar chapter 🗣️🗣️ world background not gonna lie l don't know

I can really relate to Kim/Noah. And can we all appreciate how much work was put into the characters? They really did a good job in making hate Amy. Can't wait for the other chapters

I saw other authors doing it, so I shall shamelessly as well. Why not? I'll review the book once more, giving its pros and cons when it gets to chapter 100. For now, ask any questions you have, and I'll do my best to answer them (ofc no spoilers). Those asking for the discord, the link will be below the synopsis when it's up. Thank you to all who have taken their time to read the little world I made even tho it's imperfect in its own ways :)

这是一本好书，这是一本很棒的书，我喜欢你的小说，永远不要停止写作，作者你是最好的书

I personally didn’t like how the story was written. It has an okay intro, but the progression feels off—at least for me. Also, I don’t understand his obsession with killing them. I mean, yes, I don’t mind it as a goal, but the sheer amount of obsession he has breaks the flow. and he is almost like a mentally ill person. If that’s the case, there should have been some mention of his mental instability. But it’s fine; I’m only on chapter 31, so I still have a lot more to read.

Review Time [Note:something happened to my previous review, so here we go again] Story: 99/10 Grammar: 10/10 Pacing: 8.9/10 Update stability: 10/10 It will reach the peak. It's a magnificent story. Well written, very good grammar and the pacing is good. I'm excited. I'm liking Noah and Maya's character so far. Noah is like ayanokoji, has everything planned and Maya is a sweet assassin. It's going so far good. Since it's no harem, I want to see how the romance will turn out. So give it a try. Looking forward to seeing more chapters.

I found the beginning to be far better than the middle and end, and the story truly falls apart at the end of Act 1, or the twist. The writing wasn’t bad, especially in the beginning, but typos do litter it. What really put me off were the love interests; they felt forced and moved too fast. I also despise multiple love interests—it annoys me, so this part is personal. The world-building, or lack thereof, leaves something to be desired. You created churches and gods, so develop them early on and form your world around them. For example, make all the nobles clergy members who rule over the church and its land, like the Catholics did in England before the 7th century. Add orders to all of them and make the religion the focal point, because that’s the center of your power system. Instead of mana, make it divinity. Characters could grow stronger based on how closely they follow the church’s tenets—the more in line they are, the stronger they become. Now, for the academy’s world-building, it’s lackluster, and I couldn’t tell you how to navigate it. There are very few named buildings, and the buildings that are named are poorly constructed. The combat also leaves some parts to be desired, but it’s fine for the most part. Character descriptions are pretty solid. The plot moves fast—sometimes too fast—but I did enjoy it for a while and saw a lot of potential. However, much of it was wasted due to inexperience and rushed sections. That said, the author will most likely create great novels in the future because, for the most part, their weaknesses are basic issues that will improve with more writing. I believe good things will come from this author, and I hope they continue. P.S. Sorry for the typos and missed words. I’m rushing this, and I type slower than I think.

I am truly disappointed. I’m just an ordinary reader, and I’m very disappointed. Most of the tags are not valid and are there just for show. In my opinion, character development is somewhat lacking, and, let’s say, "the world revolves around the main character, and when he interacts with others, it’s as if they come off pause." To me, that’s bad. There’s no real development, the system is practically useless, and the main character doesn’t grow in terms of strength or personality. He talks about killing when it’s convenient for him, which I find hypocritical. Moreover, the character he admired just disappeared as if they never existed, along with Noah’s respect for them. In terms of power, the author simply gave him a 30x mana boost and left it at that. The author turned a novel with potential into something monotonous, dull, and unpolished, far worse than slice-of-life stories due to the "world revolves around the hero" aspect and the author’s forgetfulness.

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I really like this book and am looking forward to reading more chapter's

So I like the novel but I have a couple nitpicks. First the servants shouldn't be joking or talking so casually in front of their bosses and powerful people or be using slang. One maid says I knew he would look good in any fit. Just no. and then a guard cracks jokes and the other guard with him does too. overall good but you gotta make certain things make sense. especially with people of high society using slang. and there is a couple of spelling and word choice errors.

Hello, I wanted to tell you something. I was one of your first readers who read this story when it had maybe around 4k views and 1 or 2 comment , and I’m happy with how far you’ve come. The novel is good, but I started to lose interest when the whole setting of the novel changed, and the MC started acting arrogant. To be frank, I didn’t like his character at all. Maybe it’s because of my bias, as I liked his first personality where he was kind-hearted, helpful, and gave those funny reactions when he had to explain things in front of class. It reminded me of my school days. Lastly, you surely kept your promise of killing the main character, which I asked you to do back in chapter 3 of the novel. I think I typed a big review, so I’ll end it here. Yet again, this was a great read for me, at least. The MC not simping for girls is a plus point for me. Also, I wanted to say that you really did that girl bad. I forgot her name, but I’m talking about the other reincarnator who was also killed but didn’t return. It’s the first time I felt bad for a character who wasn’t even shown for more than one or two chapters. The way she said to Noah that he could return, but she couldn’t, filled me with sadness 😔. I wanted to comment on that so badly, but sadly, I was on the Novel Bin website. Shoot, looks like I ended up typing even more. I don’t know if you’ll read this or not, but goodbye, and I hope you achieve even more success with this novel.