A merchant story where the merchant never sells anything. Starts off ok, then starts to go steadily downhill before degrading into a choppy mess where keeping track of what is going on starts to become a chore and then it only gets worse once other realities become involved.
18 days ago
2
Quake_Midaro
Starts off rocky but tolerable and then proceeds to dive of a cliff into idiocy and poorly done (like bad even for AI) AI story writing man seriously seems the only half decent fic you got is the RWBY one and even then it’s noticeably shittier from ch.1 to where it is now at 46?48? (Don’t exactly remember removed it from my library along with all of your fics) if I could give this a 0/5 I would
16 days ago
1
Patrick_Hardy
So are the chapters the same in this book just like the original?
2 months ago
1
DaoistOkt3Ea
it's fallout, it starts okay and then sharply goes down hill.
20 hours ago
0
Bill_Smith_2424
Yeah still shit get rid of the evasion stuff and add harem or just stop rewriting
7 days ago
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David_Delgado
I give it a five star good story I hope I see more chapters and use the store more often I want to see what type of crazy things you could pull out maybe build his own base or join in a group like brotherhood of steel that's a good one if you become a leader The enclave it's hard to work with unless you should take the technology and burned The enclave to the ground there is a lot of good technologies in the West land if I remember right fallout New Vegas have a lot of interesting technology
4 months ago
0
Bill_Smith_2424
It was good until the invasion everything else was good
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A merchant story where the merchant never sells anything. Starts off ok, then starts to go steadily downhill before degrading into a choppy mess where keeping track of what is going on starts to become a chore and then it only gets worse once other realities become involved.
Starts off rocky but tolerable and then proceeds to dive of a cliff into idiocy and poorly done (like bad even for AI) AI story writing man seriously seems the only half decent fic you got is the RWBY one and even then it’s noticeably shittier from ch.1 to where it is now at 46?48? (Don’t exactly remember removed it from my library along with all of your fics) if I could give this a 0/5 I would
So are the chapters the same in this book just like the original?
it's fallout, it starts okay and then sharply goes down hill.
Yeah still shit get rid of the evasion stuff and add harem or just stop rewriting
I give it a five star good story I hope I see more chapters and use the store more often I want to see what type of crazy things you could pull out maybe build his own base or join in a group like brotherhood of steel that's a good one if you become a leader The enclave it's hard to work with unless you should take the technology and burned The enclave to the ground there is a lot of good technologies in the West land if I remember right fallout New Vegas have a lot of interesting technology
It was good until the invasion everything else was good
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