The Sinful Young Master

The Sinful Young Master

Fantasy276 Chapters734.7K Views
Author: Luciferjl
3.93
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After dying from betrayal, Thomas reincarnates as Jolthar Kaelzhar, the neglected son of a powerful clan, just after his brothers kill him. With Jolthar's memories and the blessing of Qalena, Thomas vows to rise from his lowly position and claim power in his new life.



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Luciferjl
Luciferjl

Hi everyone, I have created a new story exploring the realm of gods and mortals. I hope you will enjoy it, and I welcome your suggestions and reviews.

5 months ago
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Anakin_Lost
Anakin_Lost

Reveal Spoiler

3 months ago
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Daoist_shini
Daoist_shini

Reveal Spoiler

a month ago
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Xyrone
Xyrone

If u think he’s gonna have revenge or even attempt to get it early, u are mistaken. He actually returns from the mountains and becomes the lap dog of the family that betrayed him. Also there are a lot of smut scenes with random side characters which is very uncomfortable. Not my cup of tea

3 months ago
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chinn_a
chinn_a

please let it be harem. cleora had me and she seems interesting

5 months ago
3
gokol
gokol

bullshit story. not interested ..........

a month ago
2
Rangr
Rangr

is this going to have a lot of incss, please tell

6 months ago
2
Brainstorm_986
Brainstorm_986

honestly, i couldn't read over the third chapter. I understand that I'm reading for free, not buying a book, but this really needs to be worked.

25 days ago
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Rexburn12
Rexburn12

The author made an intriguing and awesome story filled with action, mystery, adventure, and magic. Thus, the story is a must-read for anyone!!!!!.

3 months ago
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50points
50points

A novel belonging in the fantasy category completely, this is due to the inconsistent knowledge used by the MC and the random resources generated with it. An example is to obtain clay the MC mixes soil with water which is possible to do, but then uses the clay to create an oven or maybe it was a forge 3x the size of the last one he had at the family keep without a time skip or any real explanation how it was established within a short period. The world background might have been stated at some point in the future of the story I just never got to it. MC is never given any details or anyone for that matter besides relation to MC. The story has no driving factor for the MC. It seemed the MC died at the start of the story could only assume heart attack or stoke maybe due to trauma, but arrives in new world with no signs of that happened. In addition sentece structuring is questionable at best and might need a rewrite (this is coming from me, which struggles with English too).

6 months ago
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Suk_min_Tak
Suk_min_Tak

what is this sh..t, I don't understand from A to Z

11 days ago
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Tharun_Chintu_2602
Tharun_Chintu_2602

add some sauce too and the action already good

14 days ago
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Rangr
Rangr

such a good story as it progresses........

a month ago
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Rangr
Rangr

humans and gods, blend of their stories, the story grows more and more interesting

a month ago
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nani_Vr
nani_Vr

Gives the vibes of too much revenge drama and you have me hooked up, update daily

5 months ago
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