Reincarnated into my favorite videogame

Your story is compelling, and the characters are well-developed. I'm interested to see where it goes. Keep writing—you're onto something good

The story shows more potential than the last ones and the structure is solid, but there is more to develop, so keep writing and push it further.

Your story is really good, but it’s missing a few things that could make it even better. Adding more details to describe the setting and characters would help the readers picture everything more clearly. With a few small changes, your story could be amazing 👍!

I absolutely love reading your stories, and this particular story has such an amazing, captivating plot! Can you please post the next chapter quickly? I’m really eager to see what happens next 🥺

why does the reviews and even the single fake review sound and look so fake is it just me T-T 5 star cus i just wanted to say that and i havent read it.

come to think of it your story isn't that good any ways it doesn't deserve a good review 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄

this is my second review of this story and truly it is amazing (disregarding instability of updates)..................................................................

your story is becoming even more interesting, i love how the only reason Nari staying away from her friends is too avoid hurting her friends

Hi ! I just wanted to say how much I'm enjoying your story so far. It’s really interesting to see a character with my name—it adds a unique touch! I’m looking forward to what happens next, especially with Nari and Leo. Keep up the great work!

your story has become even better i love the squirrel part in the new chapter, keep it up!............................................................