Ancestral Lineage

Hello author! I'm leaving a review. The story is good and interesting. The humor is also on point and I already like the two idiots. The only problem is that, you sometimes go too far in your paragraphs, making them long. And sometimes, it feels rigid, like AI. Maybe you use ai for grammar checks but apart from that, this book is very good. I'm new on Webnovel and this is one of my first reads and I must say, I'm very impressed. Good luck

It's an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.

I reach chapter 35 and so far all I can say is this novel have the wrong title as of now it should be called nerf the mc as much as possible lineage system the boy already weak why not nerf him right?on top of it and then give him plot armor to just make it by. another pathetic mc at least as of now chapter 35 what the f*** you authors be thinking at least the guy have a lil bit of balls and charisma to make up for it but damn man all that so called potential and still getting embarrassed I say it's best he didn't have a system might have been stronger

great story I'm just hope both brothers stay brotherly to eachother they end up like scar and mufusa.

Quite the book, love the plot and how it's so simple to follow, definitely recommended.

First of all the approach of a second mc seems interesting and I have not seen this very much. It is a breath of fresh air and the story seems fun and serious at the same time. I am excited for more and recommend others to try it

The story is exciting with suspense and good expansive plots. I recommend you to read it

You gotta fear the authority of the principal I say. Anyway, your written is superb.

This novel excels in its intricate world-building and the dynamic evolution of Ethan's character. With each new power he acquires, the stakes rise, drawing him into a web of ancient secrets and formidable foes. The story masterfully balances action, suspense, and the deeper question of identity and legacy, making it a compelling read from start to finish.

Definitely an intriguing story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Will keep reading

I like the story of how the MC's power will grow along with the power of his friends. I feel that this story also does a good job of depicting friendship, rivalry, and love.

What I liked most is that the plot isn’t just about leveling up or becoming overpowered. There’s a strong focus on uncovering family secrets, facing the burden of power, and building trust with allies. The pacing is steady, and the world feels lived-in, with well-developed lore and magical elements that make you want to explore more. Ethan’s companions also add a lot to the story—each has distinct abilities and personalities that complement his journey. While a few scenes could use a little more polish, the overall narrative keeps things interesting. It's a solid pick for fans of fantasy stories with systems, lineage-based powers, and real character growth. Definitely a novel I’d recommend if you’re looking for something unique and immersive.

What makes it stand out is how each bloodline grants him completely different powers, from psychic abilities like telepathy to earth manipulation. It’s a refreshing twist compared to typical one-affinity MCs. The pacing is solid and the world-building is deep enough to keep you hooked. I loved how Ethan’s journey isn’t just about getting stronger but also about discovering the secrets of his lineage and dealing with the weight of inherited power. The supporting characters aren’t just background noise either—they’ve got their own stories and unique skills that add depth to the group. There are a few parts where the dialogue could feel a bit smoother, but honestly, it didn’t take away from my enjoyment. The mix of action, mystery, and personal growth keeps the plot engaging. If you’re into fantasy with a good balance of system elements, bloodline lore, and character-driven storytelling, give this one a shot. Definitely worth the read.

Nice story man but I noticed some few, not necessarily mistakes but yeah. I know writing is very hard and especially if you are creating a fictional novel, so it might have dodged your notice. The earlier chapters lack a bit of clarification on certain things like the time difference in the Beast Plane and Ethan’s world. Please if you can, update them. All in all, the novel is very good and I wish you success. Hope to catch up soon.