Ancestral Lineage

Hello author! I'm leaving a review. The story is good and interesting. The humor is also on point and I already like the two idiots. The only problem is that, you sometimes go too far in your paragraphs, making them long. And sometimes, it feels rigid, like AI. Maybe you use ai for grammar checks but apart from that, this book is very good. I'm new on Webnovel and this is one of my first reads and I must say, I'm very impressed. Good luck

It's an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.

great story I'm just hope both brothers stay brotherly to eachother they end up like scar and mufusa.

Quite the book, love the plot and how it's so simple to follow, definitely recommended.

First of all the approach of a second mc seems interesting and I have not seen this very much. It is a breath of fresh air and the story seems fun and serious at the same time. I am excited for more and recommend others to try it

The story is exciting with suspense and good expansive plots. I recommend you to read it

You gotta fear the authority of the principal I say. Anyway, your written is superb.

This novel excels in its intricate world-building and the dynamic evolution of Ethan's character. With each new power he acquires, the stakes rise, drawing him into a web of ancient secrets and formidable foes. The story masterfully balances action, suspense, and the deeper question of identity and legacy, making it a compelling read from start to finish.

Definitely an intriguing story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Will keep reading

I like the story of how the MC's power will grow along with the power of his friends. I feel that this story also does a good job of depicting friendship, rivalry, and love.

A very good novel. The story itself is neither entirely original nor cliché, but the author writes it with high quality. The writing style is solid, and the descriptions are detailed and well-done. We get to see different characters’ perspectives and understand their emotions. The comedy is well-placed, and the power system seems unique—especially the awakening method, which felt fresh, original, and unusual. The system overall appears promising, even though I’ve only read six chapters so far and it's only been introduced briefly. As for improvements or weaknesses, honestly, I don’t have much to say at this point. Everything seems well-crafted so far. The only minor thing I could mention is that the pacing feels a bit slow. Other than that, best of luck to you, author—I wish you great success!

I don't think there's anything else I can say about this book that hasn't been said. I literally forgot my project while reading this book... YES IT'S THAT GOOD

Love the development of your book, keep it uo

c'est un bon roman, surtout qu'il maintient son côté chaud dans le roman.