A psychopathic man gets killed while running from the cops, and no surprise, he goes to hell where the literal devil gives him a mission to fulfil while in the world of One Piece... Create Chos!
There is no depth. The MC just goes around killing everything. There is also Rаpe stuff. If you like that good for you but this is not for me
4 months ago
52
The_4th
Just not very good overall, plenty of misspelled words, bad syntax, and an edgy ahh main character (which I should have expected just from the interaction of serial killer him with the cops tbh). Not criminally bad, just mediocre.
4 months ago
21
Abdullah_Alghamdi_9810
Great story with an actual evil main character lol 😂 he’s a villain like a real villain not some guy with a villain tag 💀
That man is a menace to the point that I want him to replace Blackbeard and imu in the story because then will have a great main villain for one piece although he probably would win and destroy the world ☠️
My only “ complaint” is that I don’t feel that jjk template’s will be of use in higher tier worlds like bleach or dragon ball so later on if he travels to other worlds he either has to learn their power system or get a stronger template system than his
You can fix that to some extent by making him a prodigy but there are some abilities that can’t be beaten by training such as the godlike abilities of aizen , Yhwach or the gods of destruction and Zeno
Unless he gets the wheel of mahoraga and becomes stronger with him as he gets stronger that way he can proudly say
NUH! UH ! I’d adapt 🗿
4 months ago
20
H_ell
Be proud......
You have a good story...
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This doesn't allow me to give it a 20/10 but I would give it if I could.
This doesn't allow me to give it a 20/10 but I would give it if I could.
4 months ago
17
Asura69s
From my moral or reality standpoint this is a psychopath killer story.......I give -♾️ starts 🤡
From a fictional stand point
This is a really cool novel, amazing fighting scene and all that so yeah 5 start from me
4 months ago
12
mrgoldensun
You have a good disgusting story and I can't not leave it an amazing rating.
2 months ago
11
Taiju_Hanma_Ryomen
I only have one thing to say about this story, it's really cool, really cool.I liked the first three chapters the most, I'll be waiting for the next ones!
4 months ago
9
Thomas_Istas_4104
Spelling mistakes, wrong pronouns.
MC is a disgusting mass murdering rapist.
2 months ago
5
Siumhasan
very good 😊 💯💯💯💯💯😊 . v . v . good 👍
4 months ago
5
ArielBender
I honestly love the MC! The negative opinions are only people who can't stand seeing a really evil person and not the typical antagonist "with codes or honor."
a month ago
3
Emerson_Leite
It would be good for the author of this to seek psychological help, I'm a little worried about how his psyche is currently. Nothing against stories like MC villain, but this is a bit much.
Good luck and God bless, my friend.
a month ago
3
LastGod
cringe murder hobo shit no depth no goal just kill because author want MC to look edgy.
2 months ago
3
iRapeJadeBeauties
Def not for everyone. But I like it pretty good. At least give it a try if you like an evil mc.
MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE AUTHOR-SAMA
3 months ago
3
Fahad_Khurram
i really like this story be proud it's one of the best in my opinion
4 months ago
3
Immortal_FOX_1
This is fic was a journey start to finish I enjoyed it very much it was one of the best villain fics I’ve read in my over a year of reading fanfics sad to see it end but hopefull for the authors next fics if you want a good villain with not a overwhelming amount of smut this is the fic for you and i highly recommend people who come across this read it
There is no depth. The MC just goes around killing everything. There is also Rаpe stuff. If you like that good for you but this is not for me
Just not very good overall, plenty of misspelled words, bad syntax, and an edgy ahh main character (which I should have expected just from the interaction of serial killer him with the cops tbh). Not criminally bad, just mediocre.
Great story with an actual evil main character lol 😂 he’s a villain like a real villain not some guy with a villain tag 💀 That man is a menace to the point that I want him to replace Blackbeard and imu in the story because then will have a great main villain for one piece although he probably would win and destroy the world ☠️ My only “ complaint” is that I don’t feel that jjk template’s will be of use in higher tier worlds like bleach or dragon ball so later on if he travels to other worlds he either has to learn their power system or get a stronger template system than his You can fix that to some extent by making him a prodigy but there are some abilities that can’t be beaten by training such as the godlike abilities of aizen , Yhwach or the gods of destruction and Zeno Unless he gets the wheel of mahoraga and becomes stronger with him as he gets stronger that way he can proudly say NUH! UH ! I’d adapt 🗿
Be proud...... You have a good story... . . . . This doesn't allow me to give it a 20/10 but I would give it if I could. This doesn't allow me to give it a 20/10 but I would give it if I could.
From my moral or reality standpoint this is a psychopath killer story.......I give -♾️ starts 🤡 From a fictional stand point This is a really cool novel, amazing fighting scene and all that so yeah 5 start from me
You have a good disgusting story and I can't not leave it an amazing rating.
I only have one thing to say about this story, it's really cool, really cool.I liked the first three chapters the most, I'll be waiting for the next ones!
Spelling mistakes, wrong pronouns. MC is a disgusting mass murdering rapist.
very good 😊 💯💯💯💯💯😊 . v . v . good 👍
I honestly love the MC! The negative opinions are only people who can't stand seeing a really evil person and not the typical antagonist "with codes or honor."
It would be good for the author of this to seek psychological help, I'm a little worried about how his psyche is currently. Nothing against stories like MC villain, but this is a bit much. Good luck and God bless, my friend.
cringe murder hobo shit no depth no goal just kill because author want MC to look edgy.
Def not for everyone. But I like it pretty good. At least give it a try if you like an evil mc. MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE AUTHOR-SAMA
i really like this story be proud it's one of the best in my opinion
This is fic was a journey start to finish I enjoyed it very much it was one of the best villain fics I’ve read in my over a year of reading fanfics sad to see it end but hopefull for the authors next fics if you want a good villain with not a overwhelming amount of smut this is the fic for you and i highly recommend people who come across this read it