DANMACHI: The Silence's Heir (OC x Freya)

Honestly i don’t see the appeal in this story, the main character is shown to have a certain amount of strength and i like some of his skills but i hate the whole plot of this story. Being pushed around and hated simply for the plot of the story is just plain lame and unnecessary it also doesn’t help that he’s basically a background character who doesn’t change anything of importance.

(Lo siento)........................................... ...........................................................................................................................

I tried to read past chapter 8 but it’s hard to continue with the MC playing the Martyr is annoying especially when everyone basically spits in his face but you have him going back to save and cater to them leaves a bad taste in my mouth. The you have OCxFreya in the title like the first dozen chapters of your story shouldn’t leave the MC and readers repulsed by her. If your response is I should read past ALL that at the chance of eventually liking the story then you can only be mistaken. You ruined the character and in turn made your story lackluster it was good in at the very start. Wish you well in the future.

I like it so far, but I will see, but the writer has too many stories he should focus on 2 to 4 stories and get it going

pretty good but I'm kind of pissed at the end you kind just like no one came when he came to see him down from heaven not Hestia or Bell anyone else like did they all just disappear what you didn't even have to Sweet moment with for Freya kind of you like 16 years later set they just said there names the end . i hope you make a spin-off like with MC makes his familiar be with Freya