The world seems really well thought out but I feel like the quality of writing limits my understanding of it. Sometimes characters will say one thing then do the exact opposite and I'm left a little confused. I feel like the story could benefit from a switch in focus from description to easily understood scenes and better flow. Still really good, would recommend
4 months ago
2
shivam_dua
Bravo boss!!! Loved the chapter[img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
10 months ago
2
Semzer
Best piece of work I have ever read, the level of imagination is straight up fire. The only work that can be done further is in the quality of writing. I believe the author is new and has not much experience but still I am extremely surprised by this book
2 months ago
1
Anish_Nambiar
Great start to what seems to be an interesting story. Eager for further updates.
The world building is very intricate and could be really good when fleshed out further.
The world seems really well thought out but I feel like the quality of writing limits my understanding of it. Sometimes characters will say one thing then do the exact opposite and I'm left a little confused. I feel like the story could benefit from a switch in focus from description to easily understood scenes and better flow. Still really good, would recommend
Bravo boss!!! Loved the chapter[img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Best piece of work I have ever read, the level of imagination is straight up fire. The only work that can be done further is in the quality of writing. I believe the author is new and has not much experience but still I am extremely surprised by this book
Great start to what seems to be an interesting story. Eager for further updates. The world building is very intricate and could be really good when fleshed out further.