Hm... I can see imperfections in this novel. Oh well.
the novel follows the trope of becoming a side character. But my own MC has some benefits as he's prince, surviving his written death narrowly.
I put quite the work in the power system and world building so Just hope you like it.
Also, the female lead. I love to write complex characters so I'm sure you guys would fall in love with the characters.
8 months ago
22
last_laugh_1
character and plot development is intresting and mainly world background is something new along with fresh power system , i hope author updates regularly
5 months ago
4
Divine_univers
story suffers from a lack of flow, it's very event to event based, and it's hard to read at certain points do to sentence structure not being the best. fights can be hard to imagine and as stated above with the event to event based reading it feels like details are left out at certain points. still think its worth reading it's just rough
4 months ago
1
DaoistkaOf7h
It’s stable realeaes, pretty good. I got no complaints other than the weapons he uses a ninjato. Japanese swords are overused and overrated, that the only stereotypical thing. Got its own unique lore and cultivation system. It’s not like the Chinese ones that make randoms random names and say “ they broke through the slooopy do realm” and you never knew this realm existed and completely random. What I’m trying to say it you will get the basic of the cultivation realm and it won’t be random shit. No Harem which is good, I’m all for romance, it would be a sad world for this guy not to get a wife at some point. Still hate his primary weapon but other than that it’s good.
Hm... I can see imperfections in this novel. Oh well. the novel follows the trope of becoming a side character. But my own MC has some benefits as he's prince, surviving his written death narrowly. I put quite the work in the power system and world building so Just hope you like it. Also, the female lead. I love to write complex characters so I'm sure you guys would fall in love with the characters.
character and plot development is intresting and mainly world background is something new along with fresh power system , i hope author updates regularly
story suffers from a lack of flow, it's very event to event based, and it's hard to read at certain points do to sentence structure not being the best. fights can be hard to imagine and as stated above with the event to event based reading it feels like details are left out at certain points. still think its worth reading it's just rough
It’s stable realeaes, pretty good. I got no complaints other than the weapons he uses a ninjato. Japanese swords are overused and overrated, that the only stereotypical thing. Got its own unique lore and cultivation system. It’s not like the Chinese ones that make randoms random names and say “ they broke through the slooopy do realm” and you never knew this realm existed and completely random. What I’m trying to say it you will get the basic of the cultivation realm and it won’t be random shit. No Harem which is good, I’m all for romance, it would be a sad world for this guy not to get a wife at some point. Still hate his primary weapon but other than that it’s good.