DxD/Testament: The Perfect Devil

could be better than your other book but I can't tell yet.

Ok the novel is good and all with all the character emotions and interactions, It is a very good read for a few people, but not for me because: 1. You have made a setting that Devils can't grow stronger if they train e.g. MC can't increase his total amount of power than he already has he can only learn techniques to better use that power or increase lethality 2. I can not vibe with MC, not understand and stand by his goals and all that and that is breaking my immersion

It's shaping up to be a very interesting story. Of course, it is still too early for a proper review but from reading the first chapter I can tell it has potential. Ayanokoji vs Makima.

I'm wondering if the main character will only attract girls who are already yandere from the start, or if he has the ability to turn normal girls into yanderes.

Too early to say much but Ayanokoji vs Makima ……the potential… it’s overwhelming ,,,, also is there going to be yuri in harem ?

not the best but it is good, no doubt... it's just a certain part of this destroyed and wiped out all the interest I have... DROPPING... I don't believe in perfection, but a glaring imperfections/imbalance is a no no no no no

Since its a DxD. I will ask the obvious Question. Is it Harem or No Harem. And if there is No reply. I will consider Author is trying to ignore this Question since he is Going for the No Harem. and doesn't want to upset the Harem seekers early. Since any reader reading a Dxd fic, will go on thr assumption that it is Harem. BTW. I like this book, be it Harem or no Harem.

What will be the update time of story and how many chapter will be updated

Yandere girls without harem tag? I know you was a weirdo from you past work, but you are real freak. Disgusting.

Great story keep it up I hope Avalon puts Mio in his peerage

Can't wait to see how this goes! Great first chapter!

I don't know the story, even if he didn't get involved with many girls, don't you know that girls are stronger than men in both of these animes? I don't know why he goes to the house of a potential fiancée and hires a boy as a bishop. The story is good.

Overall, this has been an enjoyable read so far. The characters are well done, and you have clearly gone in your own direction that strays far off from canon, which is fine as long as you keep yourself grounded. The fact that it is a mish mash of worlds is fine, but it would be nice if you grounded them a bit more to the main storyline, as they feel somewhat loosely tied to the story as of now. But it is still looking promising. The writing quality is superb, nothing really to complain on that front. The characters come across as unique, and each have a distinct voice, so well done on that front. Though I am a bitt iffy if they are meant to be similar to their 'canon' counterparts in their verse, as not all of them align to that. The updates are a bit spiritic, but I can see that you are planning to post on Patreon, so it is understandable. Overall, I am very satisfied, and am looking forwards to new updates. So good luck, and I wish you the best!

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