The Dark Rebirth of Pandora: Revenge of the Abyss

one of my dream books that I always wanted to read. the plot seems interesting and is really detailed too, also main character is a type that I rarely see (a character that truly is a monster that follows their own instinct instead of staying with human morality but monster body) the only problem is while reading I saw some word errors like missing sentence or a wrong usage of words English is not my first language so I may be wrong on that.. overall it's really good story but not for soft stomach imo.

although the work has sensitive themes, it is very good, it has an interesting plot, and it has a lot of potential if the Author doesn't get lost along the way.

eu conectei minha conta só para comentar. a historia é muito boa. gosto de como tem capitulo todos os dias. o enredo e bom e mesmo com o prazo todos capitulos são criativos, os personagens são bem unicos cada um é diferente do outro mostrando diversidade, alem da hiatoria de fundo que e muito bem estruturada ate agora nunca encontrei um buraco na trama. embora tenha alguns pontos que parecam buraco foram explicados em capitulos futuros de forma bem detalhada. gosto do grau de violencia e sexualidade nos capitulos que tem. e por fim acho que tenho grande animação em dizer Que Pandora é um pronagonista bem interessante,embora os primeiros 4 capitulos comecem bem cliche depois muda totalmente se tornando unico, a Pandora e o tipo de protagonista que muitos procuram e é super raro aparecer,uma protagonista com o toque certo de obcessão e loucura, que é sanguinaria e fofa, que é esperta mais nada em nivel absurdo para deixar tudo facil, alem de ser uma obra onde ela realmente vai crescendo aos poucos ao inves de ter o poder de mão beijada. adoraria se tivesse tradução para PT Br

Self-Assessment of My Work I’ve just realized that I can do a self-assessment, so here’s my take on my work so far. I think it’s turned out pretty well. The premise is interesting, and I’ve worked hard to make the characters stand out as unique individuals, rather than just background NPCs. I try to give each character their own distinct personality to make them memorable. There are a lot of details in the story, but I try to balance them with the pacing so it doesn’t overwhelm the reader. Even though the themes can be heavy at times, the reading experience flows well and isn’t too hard to follow. Of course, there might be the occasional small writing mistake here and there. I’m not a native English speaker, but I always do my best to correct any errors I find. I’m always open to questions and suggestions. However, I can’t guarantee I’ll add every suggestion, as I only make changes that fit with the direction I’ve already planned for the story. Overall, I’m happy with what I’ve created. I think it has a lot of potential, and I’d definitely recommend giving it a chance.

This book is literally my dream book, the book I would write myself if I wasn't so lazy. It has properly confident evil mc, who is yandere with almost no morals.

Very good recommend, the story is very well structured, and the characters have unique personalities is approved (W0W))(8-8)([#0=--=0#])(*'U'*)

the author of this novel really knows what they are doing. keep up the good work👍