'If I don’t have to open it, then I’ll just see my way out of here.' Zach’s eyes darted across the room, in search of an exit.
Then, the horrid truth dawned upon him.
There was no door.
Suddenly, the closet bursted open, its doors flying right off its hinges; finding themselves imbeded deep into the walls by the window. A violent squall flew out from the closet door, slamming into Zack’s figure; knocking him off his feet.
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The book is honestly quite nice, though the paragraphs are a bit wordy, and take a lot of space, probably making reading a little difficult on mobile, the writing style is good. It has no grammar mistakes at all, though I might be wrong on this because I might've read over some of the paragraphs a bit too fast. Obviously, being a horror story with only 1 chapter, there are not any side characters yet, also because there is only 1 chapter, the MC is not too fleshed out yet, however, the main character doesn't use the same, "Wait, where am I", "W-what happened" bs that a lot of reincarnation stories use, obv since there isn't much else to say the MC says that stuff like once or twice at the start, though it is expected, the nice part is that the author knows that stuff like this are a mood killer and ruins immersion thus uses other words and sentences to fix this, sometimes said words can mess up the tension of the story a little bit. The chapter is overall really good, and my favorite part was the ending, it was really, REALLY good. To conclude, the story is definitely great so far, but it'd probably need at least 50-60 chapters to be given a full and proper evaluation. Great read IMO(in my opinion) and I think you should read it too, now toodles!
Yes, I know what you're thinking, is this dude really giving his own book a 5 star rating? yes, yes I am. For review word count I must say a few words, so here are said words, read, now, put in it in your library, even if you don't like it, just have it there.