This Is Definitely Not Dragon Ball!!

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I like it. I remember reading something similar, but this one is better written. The only thing I don’t really like is that half of the story focuses on forming a harem, even though there aren’t any +18 scenes. Obviously, those scenes aren’t necessary to make a good story, but in a fanfic where the plot revolves around that, it doesn’t make much sense.

This shit is more peak than KSI's song man. Absolutely loving it 🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️

Translation is good - that's about it. This fanfic is a disguised brainrot. Mc is retard (confirmed by author). It's a dbz fanfic with "catch them all teenagers" mentality. The grooming is f insane. Even characters are cringing at mc actions. Not to mention it has many missed opportunities it's sickening. Ages and timeline are messed up. I don't see the future for this fanfic.

Honestly, it started okay. It lures you into thinking maybe it would be different, but that just changes after he gets to Earth. It's time to catch them all and start on galactic domination. The translator does a great job—bless him for trying to get this brain rot to us—but no matter, the Chinese filth comes through.

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Un fic que se centra casi en su totalidad en harem pero no tiene lemon(? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

I didn't expect anything and it surprised me in a good way, it's a very good translation, I just hope it's not one of those Chinese fanfics that in the middle of the story turns into garbage, please translator, if so, correct the fanfic, I wouldn't mind waiting so you can make the chapters.

I've read till chapter 70 and then decided to stop reading it here and just go read the original. Writing quality: the translator is doing an excellent job translating this fanfic and haven't found any mistakes so far. However at Chapter 70 the translator decided he doesn't like all the women the the MC gets (maybe his is jealous, I don't know) so he just removed them from the fanfic. He also said he's going to remove a lot of the romance as well. Since that is the case, the writing quality received two stars. Updating stability: From what I can tell, the translator has been consistent with one chapter a day so five star here. Story development: Quite good till Chapter 70, then I dropped it since the translator has proclaimed he's going to remove a lot of what he deems "unnecessary" for the fanfic. It might have improved the quality or not, I don't know since I dropped it, but I hate it when a translator is getting too meddlesome some, so two stars here. Character design: Same reasons with the story development, in my opinion was quite good till chapter 70 but I don't know if it has changed further than that. Two stars here too. World background: This is a Dragon Ball world fanfic with some changes the original author decided to make, which in my opinion only improved and fixed some of the plot holes the original Dragon Ball had, so five star easy here.

If he arrived at Master Roshi's house earlier than the beginning of Dragon Ball's story, the Immortal Phoenix should be there, and he could gain immortality.

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I'm not a big fan of Dragon Ball, but I found it interesting. The names of the female versions of Goten and Trunks are quite strange. The author did a good job with the translation, in my opinion the meaning of the names doesn't have that much weight... you can make some adaptations without losing the essence.

Haha this is really a fun fanfic keep it coming author-san 👍

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