Frozen Flame of Dawn
In a not-so-distant future, Earth is thrown into chaos by a weird alien ship that crashes and starts leaking spiritual energy all over the place. This energy messes with the planet’s ecosystem, making everything mutate—animals, plants, even people. It’s like nature’s gone wild, with some folks getting crazy supernatural powers while others struggle to survive against mutated creatures and power-hungry groups trying to take control.
In the middle of all this craziness, Amira Hailen—a tough-as-nails ex-special forces assassin with a complicated past—gets a second shot at life. Thanks to a mysterious ally’s Mental Transference powers, she’s sent back in time, waking up with the ability to control ice. Determined to keep humanity afloat, she gathers her old crew and turns them into a reliable team amid all the chaos.
Meanwhile, Aiden Emberstorm—a fiery elite operative—gets fed up with the government’s weak response to the crisis. With his own fire powers blazing, he ditches the bureaucracy and teams up with his battalion to protect innocent lives. He becomes a symbol of resistance, taking on mutated beasts and rogue factions while trying to restore some order.
When Amira and Aiden cross paths, it’s not exactly love at first sight. Their icy and fiery personalities clash, but they can’t deny the need to join forces. They both want the same thing: a sanctuary where survivors can be safe. So, they decide to work together, hatching a plan to take down the alien ship before it can call in reinforcements for a full-scale invasion.
Amid epic battles, unexpected alliances, and a budding romance, Amira and Aiden must face both their inner demons and the alien threat. It’s a fight for survival in a world that’s gone wild, with everything at stake—including their own hearts.
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
Hi fellow author! I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. Your story is absolutely captivating, and I’m eager to see what comes next. Seriously, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up! Not that you need it, but hey, good job! I’m loving every bit of it so far. Oh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws. This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’m bracing myself for any critique, no matter how brutal, so let it rip! Your honest opinions would be invaluable. Thanks so much for considering giving it a read. Best, Ikaris P.S. Your feedback would mean the world to me!
Alright, it's a good novel that I can suggest to others. The plot is good and interesting, and the characters are well-shaped. As for writing, it's all good, described well, with good grammar that is easy to understand, while reading the words my brain imagines the scene instantly. That's all, nothing says now, so just keep it up! I'll support your novel.
The story is awesome, it's well written and I can definitely recommend to others👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It's a beautiful one for all action and sci-fi lovers. I love the book and recommend it for everyone. Frozen Flame at Dawn is a must read.
It's an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.
"Prepare to be captivated! This daring new novel brings epic adventures, dark apocalyptic challenges, and a thrilling journey from weakness to unstoppable strength. A masterpiece in the making!"
Good book, lots of interesting action and awesome writing quality the author has some good writing technics and abilities, I would like to see this book at the top
Oh my kind of book I love it Waiting for more…
Review for the fp event. Good luck with your novel, ir appesrs in the event, it should be goodl
Realy enjoyed the style of the first chapter, keep doing good work. Gona look for the rest later on but it feels realy promising. Dam word limits, feel like i should already know the whole book to just share first read feelings 😂🍺🐅
In this gripping narrative set in a desolate bunker, the detailed descriptions of the damp metallic smell, dim lighting, and outdated equipment create a tense and immersive atmosphere. The character Alex, depicted as tired and unshaven, adds depth and realism, making the reader feel the bleakness and urgency of the situation. This scene effectively sets up an engaging story filled with tension and drama
A superb written skills, good conversation skills. The system explanation was sometimes sad or happy. I am more interested in Alex. The character development is very intriguing.
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Its really well written the details ,the dialogs the characters everything was written really good ,i liked the flow of dialogs of aden and others, and the style the world building everything was nicely executed . All in all it was a good read and will recommend to others.