Bro finnish the revenge version first and stop updating this corruption version.
3 months ago
11
shoryadevraj
OK OK OK, I CAN ALSO SEE CORRUPTION PATH, I LIKE MORE REVENGE PATH, BUT I CAN ALSO GO FOR IT AS WELL
4 months ago
7
Rmein_Smef
Does the mc take revenge? (frankly, I would prefer him not to take revenge or couldn't all series end with revenge)
I think you can explain the description of the series a little more, I'm trying to decide whether to read it or not.
3 months ago
3
genshin_impact_0906
Reveal Spoiler
4 months ago
3
RandomName7
Corruption!
Corruption!
Corruption!
Corruption!
2 months ago
2
Oscar_pardo
What can I say? NTR is a matter of perspective. If the author writes the story from the point of view of a character who is being stolen from, it’s netorare, but if the story is told from the perspective of the one doing the stealing, it’s netori. For that reason, the author has an unhealthy obsession with placing us in the perspective of the protagonist when his waifus are taken away. It’s an unfunny joke.
Another element the author uses to make the story work is the complete removal of the hero’s intelligence. Even young children and the dumbest animals have a sense of selfishness that drives them to take the best for themselves and prevent others from taking it. However, the author removes this from the protagonist so that his self-insert, known as León, can exist in his little decadent world.
In the end, the only thing I like about this story is the "lemons." Author, maybe you should write less NTR and focus on developing your skills instead (you have potential).
18 days ago
1
Vizcacho_Av
Realmente me sentí mal por Xavier, y después de 400 capítulos solo puedo sentir frustración e ira hacia semejante idiota.
Aun así los limones son muy buenos, pero la obra carece de una trama propia la cual podría ayudar a aligerar la carga mental de leer a Xavier, León, y las protagonistas, quizás más combates o más lore y construcción de mundo ayuden.
a month ago
0
ASM_92
Great for those how love the genre. Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp
2 months ago
0
scoobiesnack
fantastic NTR story! hope it never gets dropped. my favorite story on here so far, wish there were more like it
2 months ago
0
Alex_Silva_0378
Let's see the differences between this and the original.
So far it has been apparently the same, but the path may change between some parts before we reach 275 for the story as a whole to make sense
Bro finnish the revenge version first and stop updating this corruption version.
OK OK OK, I CAN ALSO SEE CORRUPTION PATH, I LIKE MORE REVENGE PATH, BUT I CAN ALSO GO FOR IT AS WELL
Does the mc take revenge? (frankly, I would prefer him not to take revenge or couldn't all series end with revenge) I think you can explain the description of the series a little more, I'm trying to decide whether to read it or not.
Reveal Spoiler
Corruption! Corruption! Corruption! Corruption!
What can I say? NTR is a matter of perspective. If the author writes the story from the point of view of a character who is being stolen from, it’s netorare, but if the story is told from the perspective of the one doing the stealing, it’s netori. For that reason, the author has an unhealthy obsession with placing us in the perspective of the protagonist when his waifus are taken away. It’s an unfunny joke. Another element the author uses to make the story work is the complete removal of the hero’s intelligence. Even young children and the dumbest animals have a sense of selfishness that drives them to take the best for themselves and prevent others from taking it. However, the author removes this from the protagonist so that his self-insert, known as León, can exist in his little decadent world. In the end, the only thing I like about this story is the "lemons." Author, maybe you should write less NTR and focus on developing your skills instead (you have potential).
Realmente me sentí mal por Xavier, y después de 400 capítulos solo puedo sentir frustración e ira hacia semejante idiota. Aun así los limones son muy buenos, pero la obra carece de una trama propia la cual podría ayudar a aligerar la carga mental de leer a Xavier, León, y las protagonistas, quizás más combates o más lore y construcción de mundo ayuden.
Great for those how love the genre. Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp
fantastic NTR story! hope it never gets dropped. my favorite story on here so far, wish there were more like it
Let's see the differences between this and the original. So far it has been apparently the same, but the path may change between some parts before we reach 275 for the story as a whole to make sense