The Erratum

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From the outset, the author immerses readers in a world where the lines between legend and truth blur. The setting is steeped in mystery, and the tone is consistently moody, evoking a sense of impending doom. The incorporation of sea lore and ancient prophecies adds depth to the narrative, suggesting a world with a rich history and complex geopolitical dynamics. The protagonist, Cetas, is introduced as a figure burdened by the weight of prophecy and destiny. His internal struggles and the enigmatic nature of his journey are compelling, though some readers may find the pacing of character development to be gradual. The supporting characters, including the elusive Aegir, add layers to the narrative, though their motivations and backstories are still unfolding. the writing is descriptive painting vivid imagery that enhances the atmospheric quality of the story. However, the dense prose and intricate sentence structures may require readers to pay close attention to fully grasp the nuances of the narrative. The initial chapters set the stage for a grand adventure, introducing key conflicts and hints of larger conspiracies. While the pacing is deliberate, it serves to build tension and anticipation for the unfolding events. The slow burn approach allows for a deeper exploration of the world and characters, though some readers may prefer a quicker progression. honestly a pretty good read

Good story, with flesh out characters. The story takes it times, but onces you read it, you feel as if you with the characters, in their, world. I was hooked and goona read more. Reallt really good novel.

Shameless review here!!! I do think this is one of the novels that I've truly fleshed out - from the world building to the characters. This novel occurs in an era where humans reign supreme and pirates roam the seas! It delves deeper into the concept of mystics and creatures from the depths. Containing the mysteries of the world, the main character, Cetas, unveils the history and the memories of his life! "What kind of character is Cetas" - Cetas is a blank slate, starting off with no memories. However, as he goes on a journey, he begins to imitate others - absorbing the elements of their personalities - and thus forming his own. Whether he is influenced by evil people or good people at first, Cetas will learn throughout the story! "Is the power system unique?" That.. I do not know as I haven't read much novels aside from the mainstream ones. However, I do think that it is fleshed out enough for the readers to enjoy!! "Will there be romance?" Maybe.. Is the main character smart or overly powerful? - Cetas is blank at first. However, once he chooses his Origin, he will become cunning and much more intuitive of the surroundings. As the story progresses, he will unlock abilities that correspond to his Origin. "How often would you publish chapters and how long would they be?" - As of right now, I only publish when I have a chapter written, so about once per day or two. It should be about 1700+ words long and will not be lower than 1400 words. "Is it that good if you rate it a 5 star?" I do think that this novel is one that is the most fleshed out! I've only written one other novel and I am proud of that even though it didn't get much views! As a newbie writer, I will do my best to improve!

I've read a few chapters and I can already tell you that it's a good story, the terms covered are well explained, the universe is interesting and the characters are human.

The story has definite potential. There are some sentence structure things here and there that could improve the flow but it is not too distracting. Overall I think this is a great Fantasy and Mystery Story that everyone should at least give a shot reading.

I love how the author introduces the characters in the first chapters, so real and human. The world building and setting is fascinating and I can't wait to see what the author will come up next. Thank uuuu

The storytelling is great, I'm glad I found this novel before it became famous 😄. Good luck on more inspiration, author!

Well well well, if it isnt another long paragraphed novel, a treat indeed for someone like me who loves traditional novels. The world building is really deep and i can foresee so much lore and twists the author can cook up. overall, just the kind of novels i like, traditional ones with ample description and a gradual development, helps link better with the characters you know?

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This novel is Amazing. I was awestruck by the world-building and writing quality of the author. Great work Author san

Great concept and story. It has a lot of potential, the writing is very good, and it is still early to tell how it'll go, but I'll put my trust in the author, and who the heck doesn't love mythos. keep up the great work!!!