Naruto evolution system

Sorry, boring maç and mid story.Sometimes I thought the story would be exciting but it never happened.These are my personal opinions. Good luck with your story.

boring AF . FIRST FEW CHAPTERS were total waste of time and boring but next chapter were even more boring. it was painful to the ears, dizzying to eye. my mind was blanked out. even p*rn has a good story telling than this. i couldn't get a single impression from MC or system .as a reader i couldn't give a single concern(fk) to his situation. still read close to 20 chapters, it was with my own seer will because I don't want to change the novel and was stuck with it for few hours.

The novel is good with few mistakes,but my only problem is the name,can't you just change the name to a Japanese one? i mean a Chinese name in a Japanese one is uncomfortable if it were a Chinese novel it would be good but in a Japanese such as Naruto?

Overall really good novel, can't find many grammar mistakes, it's have really good story and I really like the system it's doesn't have emotion at least not now it's really good keep up the good work author

Полное гавро 50 глав только о том что гг самый слабый и у него постоянно заканчивается чакра. также 50 глав о том что гг постоянно в побеге. в целом фанфик гавно и автор тупой лох.

I really love this novel it is perfect for me it have what I want from my novel system,weak to strong mc , ruthless but kind mc,ok story keep the good work author.

Great book but MC gets nerfed more times than Naruto can create shadow clones. He doesn't care about the plot but that doesn't mean the author doesn't. Every time he faces someone of significance to the plot, his power either weaken or disappear completely. To make it less obvit that he is getting nerfed, he gets caught off guard more times than someone with at least three maxed out sensory skills should.

Mc always keeps running .There is no development to story really and overall it’s boring

A ortografia é ótima, mas esta é a típica fanfic de 'dragão oculto e tigre agachado'. Entendedores entenderão.

Love the system function, loved the beginning, yeah the mc's name needs changing but who cares? It's nothing major. Definitely gonna stick with it to see where the story goes.

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Peak fiction. Very good translation and story. A There was like 2 chaps where the mcs name was mixed up but it returned to normal later. The mc is logical and mostly netural. He doesnt really go out of his way to help unless he is feeling emotional but he also doesnt cause suffering for the sake of it.

so boring and every chapter are disappointment. one second he lose to jiraya and next he successfully capture nine tail. then he lose just to a mere black zetsu, beside infinite cloning or regeneration, zetsu doesn't have any combat power and yet he lose to it

Honestly, the concept is cool. Unique enough on its own that if utilized well the story would read better. there are many grammar and continuity mistakes. From the one name and one code name the main character is meant to go by turning into like 20 different things and everyone in the story just acts like it was normal. The writing style is very xianxia. The mistakes really took it down Author trying to be original but more dumb than anything else. The concept of the story is to be limitless yet the very reason why my doesn’t do smart things and efficient things is because “I don’t want to limit my horizons”. 203 chapters thinking it would develope into something more, I was disappointed but it occupied my time. Thanks for the effort