Giselle D. Balor woke up groggily in darkness. Chains were wrapped all around her that connected to the stone walls on all sides. The stench of mold and something...rotten. She didn't know how she ended up here or who she was. As she raised her head slowly, like her body wasn't used to moving, memories started flowing in her head. This... body has been here in the underground prison facility of Impel Down for close to a hundred years. As an orphan, in desperation in her hunger, she ate the slime slime fruit, a Zoan-type devil fruit mythical sub-class. Her home island was buster called after rumors of Demon Child Nico Robin was hiding on Sakura Island. Not taking any chances, the Navy destroyed everything that survived. When they discovered her, half of her body had turned into pale pink slime. They captured her using seastone chains and knocked her out. For a hundred years, they fed her very little after they discovered that whatever she devoured, she would develop the creature’s abilities.
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Decent start to a potentially good story if it isn’t dropped. The premise is interesting and has quite a bit of potential for different directions it could be going down with it being so early in the writing process and timeline comparative to the main journey of the strawhats. Overall with the pretty good track record the author has as long as it keeps getting uploaded we can probably look forward to something entertaining with a fairly consistent quality. :)