Naruto: Betrayed From The Start
Year 32 of Konoha.
It was lunchtime at the Ninja Academy. Kenshi, a newcomer from Earth, accepted a rice ball from Minato, whose smile was as bright and warm as the sun. As he took a bite, Kenshi couldn't help but think about Minato's tragic fate.
"To change the ninja world, I need to start by saving the Fourth Hokage, Namikaze Minato," he thought to himself.
But fate had other plans. Before Kenshi could even begin his mission, Minato who noticed something off about Kenshi. Turned him in to the Anbu, Konoha's secret police. Kenshi was then sent to a special interrogation room, a place reserved for spies.
Kenshi inside the room, stared blankly. Betrayal. He had been betrayed by the very person he intended to save. His original plan was in ruins. Now, he had a new mission: Destory Konoha.
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Shixie here, IDK where this is going yet, I've only read the first early chapters and I love the story so far, with a unique path, where he's going against Konoha, Hope you guys will like this too ^^
Author, delete similar 1-star comments. These are either ignorant people used to reading machine-translated stories where the protagonist is overpowered and omniscient, or people who don't want your work to reach the top. For those who haven't read it yet and are checking the comments to decide if it's worth reading: It definitely is. The world is well-built, and the relationships between the characters are well explained. The supernatural element in the form of chakra is described exceptionally well. All the techniques and the logic behind them that the protagonist learns always have a proper origin, rather than being granted by some "golden finger" pulled out of thin air like in some Chinese stories. The characters are well-developed, and the text is enjoyable to read. Regarding the excessive cruelty, I can only say that it's quite realistic. In a world of endless war, betrayal, and violence, it's hard to imagine kind-hearted people willing to help you. Everyone pursues their own goals or desires. Hiruzen is no exception here; he's portrayed very realistically. There’s none of that typical dynamic between Hiruzen and Danzo found in 99% of fanfics: "I’m the Hokage!" "You’ll regret this!" Sometimes characters are depicted a bit naively, such as Mito when she trusted Hiruzen, but overall, I’m satisfied and eagerly awaiting new chapters.
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i want chinese name plz want to see how MC react to situation minato palanoid too much ......................................................................................................[img=recommend]
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the sub 2k words per chapter is making this feel like a drag. it didnt even make me read it properly. i just skimmed and i was still able to follow the plot. finished it under 30 minutes as of currently theres 22 chapters released. chapter 10+ is where he'll get betrayed. chapter 20+ is where he'll get tortured. between all those theres lotsa exposition and pov changes. if u wanna read this, wait until theres 50 chapters out maybe. webnovel format being trickle feeding is such bullshit
it was too boring at first but lately it became kinda interesting good thing i kept reading keep up the good work👍
What's the name of the original? As this is clearly a transition of a Chinese story? Or maybe a continuation of a dropped story from someone who isn't a Chinese author
I feel like with a story like this which the whole reason ppl are reading is to watch konoha be destroyed that the author will drag it on for time
Очень круто мне понравилось всё Буду ждать продолжения надеюсь вы не забросили эту работу я заметила что люди пишут что это скучно но для таких людей как я это просто шедевр [img=Smitten]
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Well it’s a typical Chinese story from an author who has either little knowledge of how Naruto and its chakra systems work or just add random shit that he feels makes somewhat sense. Typically Chinese lol It’s good to kill time and interesting becayse of mc personality but the story is stretched out with little acutally happening. Especially the first 70 chapters are trash and boring
it is sorta interesting, if you like reading an author theorycrafting an AU Naruto story rather than actually reading a story. I'm personally not interested in how detailed the author's explanations of how everything works are. 75 chapters in and about half of it is the author talking about how things work. the rest is split between awkwardly written scenes of the MC being tortured, the MC swearing that he is going to make konoha and hiruzen suffer, and the MC being needlessly cruel to bystanders. there hasn't been any real character progression other than the MC going from being an ignorant idiot to acting like a low rent Pain with less of a god complex.
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This may start as boring but don't give up the later arks are so good , just imagine how will the MC take revenge on those who had bullied him! Worst than Death!.