The Extra's Transcension

Being an author on WN is too Challenging. You can never get rid of your shamelessness and here, right now here's my review for my own book. I've worked tirelessly to craft a compelling story with a smooth pace, advanced vocabulary, and minimal grammatical errors, despite English not being my native language, and I'm grateful for your continued support. Also continue supporting me, your support is my courage.:}

It’s quite good, so keep it up like this. I can see a lot of potential in this novel.[img=gift][img=update][img=update]

If you’re expecting a well-thought-out story that makes sense, then you’ve come to the wrong place. As usual, this book suffers from amateur writer syndrome, where the author comes up with a good story idea but fails to consider details beyond the plot they have in mind. They try to incorporate multiple ideas from anime and good books, ultimately oversaturating the story. Sometimes, a simple, well-written beginning is better than a flashy but poorly thought-out one. As a reader, the first few chapters are the key factors in deciding whether I will continue with a story, and this book lost most of my interest from Chapter 1. I read about four chapters, and here are some of the glaring nonsensical issues I noticed: 1. The MC initially didn’t know his mother, but the moment he learns her name, he suddenly acts as if he remembers everything. A more strategic approach would have been to continue pretending to have amnesia and gather more information about the world from his family. 2. The cause of the coma was never explained, and no one even seems to care. It just happened because the plot needed it. 3. The first thing the MC’s mother does after checking on her son is ask if he received confirmation about getting into the academy. Seriously, what are your priorities, woman? Your son just came out of a coma. 4. This concerned and loving mother then decides to leave her formerly comatose and slightly amnesiac son all alone because she has an important meeting. Their family is rich—she could have at least left him with a servant, a family member, or a family friend. 5. The MC randomly decides to complain about the how the protagonist gets everything and he got nothing . Is the first thing you do when you get transmigrated really to obsess over being the protagonist? How narrow-minded can you be? 6. For some unexplained reason, the MC has an obsession with joining the main plot. 7. The MC goes to the black market and, for some reason, is suddenly an expert in weapons. He then randomly decides to buy a rusted sword just because it looks cool or interesting (wow, talk about dumb clichés). 8. The MC appears to have no skills or elemental power, yet these things are sold like groceries in the black market. So why has his multi-billionaire, loving mother never thought about buying something like this for her son? (Don’t you dare tell me she doesn’t know these things exist. No one becomes rich and influential without gaining knowledge.) So did his mother just want her son to be mediocre? Don’t say she didn’t care—she literally handed him billions without batting an eye. All in all, I just hate books that underestimate the reader’s IQ, and this book is a prime example of that. Just saying—almost all good books have a concise and well-thought-out beginning. I won’t be continuing this book, but for the readers who are sticking with it, I hope the writing logic improves.

The most frustrating thing is mc's charm like hell...His sister and mother are beautiful and he's got their features and YET he is average? call me when his CHARM surpassed the og mc and I'll pick it up[img=angry]

it's quite good, some of the first chapters has spelling mistakes, but the new chapter has everything, you're improving keep up the great work, also, the world building has improved:)

update a new chapter already!!!!! it's already been 3 days!!!

Bro....I would do anything you want me to... just releaseeee more I'm dyingggg ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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