Pupet Master in Konoha

It has nothing to do with a puppet master. He fought with a puppet 2 time in 120 chapters. And he became a taijutsu master and sealing master instead. Plus the translation is not the best. Can you read it sure but names and sentences are weird at least once every chapter

Could you re-write this at some point. This is a really good story but your translation is just awful and it’s not getting any better. Could you at least have someone who knows Naruto to check your work or you can hand it over to someone else so they can do a better job at it.

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Here's a possible synopsis for your story: "After sacrificing himself to save a young girl, Kaito Shinji finds himself reborn in a mysterious world with a new system known as the Eclipse System. With his past life's memories intact, including his love for anime, Kaito must navigate this new reality and uncover the secrets of his rebirth. As he discovers his abilities and quests, he sets out on a journey to become stronger and unravel the mysteries of the Eclipse System. With his unique blend of military background and otaku knowledge, Kaito is poised to take on the challenges ahead and forge a new path in this unfamiliar world."Let's refine the story. Kaito Shinji was a normal office worker in Japan, with above-average strength thanks to his past experience in the Japanese army. However, his military career was cut short due to injuries sustained in his liver. Despite this, he continued to live a relatively ordinary life. One fateful day, while walking down the street, Kaito saw a little girl stepping into the path of an oncoming car. Without hesitation, he jumped into action, instinctively pushing the girl to safety. In doing so, he sacrificed himself, succumbing to fatal injuries. When Kaito's consciousness returned, he was met with an endless expanse of darkness. For years, the darkness persisted, devoid of any sensation or stimulus. It was as if time had lost all meaning. Then, a piercing white light burst forth, illuminating the darkness. Kaito's eyes, though blinded by the intensity, gradually adjusted. Unknowingly, he reached out, his hand extending towards the light. As his fingers made contact with it, a sudden surge of energy coursed through his body. The world around him began to take shape. Kaito found himself in a new, unfamiliar environment. A notification echoed in his mind: *Eclipse System Activated* *Welcome, Kaito* *Your current status:* - Health: 100/100 - Strength: 15 - Agility: 10 - Intelligence: 8 Kaito's eyes widened as he stared at the mental interface. What was this system? How did it work? He had so many questions, but no answers. Let's continue the story from here. What would you like Kaito to do next?

it's good. I usually don't like these type of novels but not bad except it's pacing is a bit slow.

leaving, the original was dropped on chapter 271,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

If you are into MTL. Where you are okay with a lot of things that are named incorrectly mostly names, items, Techniques(Jaw, Kelly, Taels instead of Ryo, Earth skill instead of Earth release), Where the MC is a Necrophiliac where his favorite thing is touching corpses. THEN THIS IS THE FIC FOR YOU!!!!